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"Happy 8th birthday (Y/N)" Your mother said. "hurry up and sit down so you can blow out the candles." You started to walk over and sat down, but your sister Isabella who is 4 years younger than you said: "Can I blow out your candles?" "No, This is my cake." she stared at you with a sad face "Well well then you can't blow out my candles." You sat down and your father walked in "Hey Birthday boy." Your dad placed the cake on the table and your mom lit the candles. You were about to blow out the candles but your sister beat you to it and you yelled: "I HATE YOU ISABELLA." you started to run towards your room crying. Your sister started to laugh "I wished for a PONY." You locked yourself in your room, you reached for your favorite book and started to read. 10 minutes later you said "I wonder where I put my cars?" you looked around until you found them hidden in your drawer. "vrooooooooom, erhhhhhhhhhh" You played with your cars for at least an hour you walked out of your room your parents and your sister were watching a movie. "watcha watching?" "were watching Peter Pan," your sister said with a big smile on her face. "the cake is still on the table if you want to redo it." your mom said "sure" you walked and whispered to your sister "don't blow my candles this time please, I'm sorry I yelled at you" It's ok (Y/N) I won't I promise. "MAKE A BIG WISH (Y/N)!" your sister yelled "I wish for a friend who will be there for me when I'm sad or lonely" you blew out the candle your mom gave you a slice of cake. "Boy you sure did like it, you ate that thing almost in a minute," Your mom said shockingly "well want to continue the movie your father fell asleep on the couch." "ok, can I sit in the middle?" "NO I sit in the middle you can sit next to me." your sister said with a mad expression "ok fine but next time I get to sit in the middle!" "ok, but for one dollar." your mother smiled while you and your sister argued. After the movie you were tired and decided to sleep, so you walked towards your room and put on your (F/C) pajamas. You brushed your teeth and went to sleep.
*BANG* you heard a loud noise coming from the other room. You walked out and saw your father lying there dead, your mother was being stabbed she whispered: "grab your sister and RUN". You ran towards your sister's room and grabbed her and ran out the back door you looked back and read your mother's lips saying "I love you!" you started to tear up, You started to run down the street towards your neighbor's house, but you realized they wern't home they were in Hawaii for their family vacation. You decided to run to the gas station which was a mile away from your house. You walked in and the man behind the desk asked you" why are you two up so late and by yourselves." "well, you can stay here for a while take what you want." "your sister who was confused and tired said" where's mommy and daddy? Are they ok?" "they got hurt really bad." your sister was tough, she was sad but did not shed a tear. "hey, get something to eat we're gonna be here for a while." Your sister grabbed some chips and the man who stabbed your parents walked in "Hey Isabella we gotta go" "why we just got here." You took your sister by your hand and ran towards the woods thinking he would not follow you there. In those woods was supposed to be a tall creature with no facial features and wore a black suit that lived there in a mansion with his family. You ran for at least 30 minutes until the creature with no facial features stood in front of you. "Hey, there boy what's your name? And who is that beautiful girl with you?" "my, my name is (Y/N) and this is Isabella, my little sister." "hey (Y/N) and Isabella I'm The Slender Man but you can call me slendy" "why are you here so late at night and alone?" "there is a man in black who killed our parents and is chasing us." "well (Y/N) and Isabella you can stay with me and my family in our mansion." "ok, are you gonna hurt us." "good heaven's no we only kill the bad people in this world" Slendy led you towards his mansion "WOW that is a big house" Isabella screamed. You walked in greeted by others "welcome home" one said "Hi there whats your name?" a blue hedgehog said "I'm (Y/N) and this is my sister" Hi I'm Sonic.EXE" Slendy led you towards your room and your sister's room which was connetced by the bathroom. "This is your room (Y/N) and this is your room Isabella" "These rooms are bigger than our other rooms," you said "Hey, Isabella it's really really late I think we should sleep "ok (Y/N)" Good night Isabella"
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FantasyMy 2nd story I deleted the other to redo it so now it's different kinda and if you could comment to tell me what I could do to make it better I would appreciate it Your parents were killed in front of you You live in a mansion with other pastas O...
