Saw: The Wire Trap *COMPLETED*

Part One: Salvation Above, Death Below

        Gerald Woke up with a splitting headache. He soon realized that he was hanging over a large array of buckets. Each of them completely sealed. In front of him were a rainbow colored pattern of long familiar tools. Wires. Lots and lots of wires.

"What the hell is going on? Where am I?!" 

The man was wearing a green collar shirt with brown pants. There was a few particles of blood splashed against his pants. His shirt was completely dry but extremely wrinkled. All the blood had went up to his brain. He felt light headed and dizzy but all he thought of was how he could get out of whatever situation he currently is in. 

Gerald tries to wiggle out of the not yet seen restraints but fails horribly. Suddenly, a doll wearing mostly black falls out from the ceiling. he's hung by his long white neck by a few red and black wires. The doll was exceptionally terrifying. It wasn't just the pale white soulless face or the messy black hair. It was the all black eyes with a tiny red iris that glared at the struggling man. 

It had an abnormally shaped head with bright red swirls across it's cheeks. The doll didn't look made for anything other then scaring or killing. It's mouth gaped open wide with a small outlet that looked like it could contain an old tape recorder. Gerald looked around for anything that would be able to fit in the doll's mouth. Conveniently, a long wire was dropped from a set of gears next to a timer. Gerald was hesitant to grab it but decided that it was the only progress he would be making in this state of freedom.

He quickly snatched it from the wire. A loud blare echoed around the room. Every gear on the ceiling began moving. Then, a timer lit up bright red. Each gear moved a wire to open up every single bucket on the ground. Gerald wished he didn't look down. Sweat began running down him and falling into a few of the buckets. Inside of almost every one, was a bright green substance with smoke coming out. Acid. Buckets full of the stuff. 

Gerald looked over to the front of him. In the right corner was one unique bucket. It looked the exact same as every other bucket but instead, this bucket was filled with a different substance. The substance was ocean blue. Inside of the bucket was water. After a few minutes of retrieving his composure, he gained the strength to place the tape inside the eerie doll's mouth. The tape automatically shot into his mouth and the doll closed it. Without warning, the doll turned it's head to face Gerald. The two were staring right at each other. Gerald covering his eyes, the doll not flinching at all. 

      The child size doll opened it's mouth and began speaking in a deep serious tone. It still sounded human but not a very welcoming voice. It was raspy and cold like ice. "Hello, Gerald. I want to play a game."

*AUTHOR'S NOTE TO READERS*

Well, Gerald looks like he's in quite the predicament, eh? Anyways, if you haven't decided that I'm a trash writer and you've read the whole part of this trap so far, I would like to thank you greatly. Of course, a thank you is required for even clicking on this story in the first place! Please do keep in mind, I'm very new at doing this type of writing so rather then hateful comments, I would appreciate comments on two things. 

1. Simply telling me how much you like these little trap ideas helps a lot. (Gives me motivation to make more.)

2. What helps even more is critiquing me on what I should do to make my writing look better. (Giving me better words to use, telling me punctuation errors, paragraph indentations, etc.)

Welp, the next part should be up by Wednesday. It's hard to publish every day considering I'm merely a 7th grader and I still have grades to keep up with but I try to write as much as I can when I have the spare time to do so.

That's it for now, Ciao amigos! :3