Safety in her silence

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CreativeDelinquents

That notice tho : the centre theme is suicide...

Wow that's impressive only 3 parts and 274 reads , 94 votes :0.

This is wrote very good and i cant see any mistakes

 : and as far as i'm concerned my eye sight is good : 

And the schedule is a good thing because your readers know when about to expect another chapter.'

 i believed that the stars were a memory of those who passed.' 

i believe that to sometimes . 

idk really what to say there is a lot of detail i don't quite get the story line yet . i will still vote for it tho . i would get it ...

 i would get it

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Mario 4 stars 

i would recommend to 14- 25ish

And continue writing these story's i like them . 


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