Blazing Soul

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This is an extended metaphor poem from my poetry class.

She looks in the mirror

Seeing the burning pit of sadness

Within her blue soul.

The fire is bright

Dominating everything,

Every thought.

The light that is unnoticeable to the trained eye

Consumes her,

Burns her,

Ignites her.

Leaving nothing but pain in it's wake.

The singed burn slowly takes over

Over powering

Any thought of water.

Carefully her firefighters come

To her rescue

Saving herself from the destruction.

The challenge was to use a metaphor that wasn't cliche so I decided my metaphor would be sadness is fire.

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