Through Her Shattered Eyes

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Author: AbigailCarlysle

Cover:
When I first saw the cover, I was a bit intimidated by it. However, after I read the description, it made more sense.

Blurb:
The description is intriguing. I have to say that I definitely wanted to read the entire story after that.

Plot:
The main character is blind in the beginning of the book. She is able to get a surgery that replaces her corneas with those of someone recently deceased. A couple of weeks after the surgery she finds that she's hearing voices and seeing memories that don't belong to her. One night, she wakes up at 1:35am and happens to look in the mirror. Her once grass green eyes are now a vibrant blue.
     From the memories that she sees and help from a friend in the police force, she sets out on a hunt to find her donor's murderer.

Grammar:
I have to say that your grammar was pretty spot on. I am impressed. ;P

Spelling:
There's a couple oopses here and there but very few of them. Congrats!

Character Development: It was a bit fast-paced in the beginning but got better as I read it.

Extra:
I have to say that once I started reading your book, I became, for lack of a better word, obsessed. I finished it. Read the whole thing. #SryNotSry
     Thanks to you, I now have another favorite book and wonderfully talented favorite author. You are my hero. Nuff said.

All in all, you got a full score of 70pts from me!!
I'd give more, but I'm not sure if that's allowed.







Please. Keep writing. Don't stop.

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