AN:So this is my first ever story,sooo..If you would be kind enough,please comment on what inprovements that I should make.Thank You.
It all started as a summer day you know,sun shining and all;probably baking you half to death at 98.6 degrees fahrenheit.My parents are out on a vacation,and gave my sister,and I the cabin in the woods,for us to stay in,until they came back from their vacation.Knowing myself I had to invite my friends over for the week.While hanging out with my friends Zac,and Dom;we've all been friends since kindergarten;my sister......still at the cabin,well I think, she is,is she?I don't really know or,care for that matter.Kara and I are twins and,all but,that doesn't mean we think alike or,get along,we fight and argue all the time.Well back to where we were,while exploring the forest full of tress, running around,climbing trees,doing stupid things.We came across what seemed to be an old man dressed in some type of well,let's say a mix between a biohazard suit and firefighter suit not to mention he had this big metal canister on his back,yeah pretty weird right.We quickly hid behind a tree."Hey ugh,..any of you want to know what that dude is doing out here?'' Zac questioned in a loud whisper "HELL no,I'm Leaving Austin you comin with?''Dom says with a look like he's ready to sprint full speed at any moment, "Shit,i guess,I have no plan on dying today,not by no crazy apocalyptic dressed old man''I say "You guys are a bunch of scary cats;I'm gonna see what's going on''He says as he tiptoes over to the old man,near the abandoned shack,and taps him on his shoulder.The old man turns around swiftly putting this house type conjuction in his face,Zac stumbles back,and falls on the ground,at this point i'm thinking oh shit this old man is about kill one my best friends,so like a good friend,I run over there with no hesitation and,knock that piece shit out of his hand.At this point the old man looks mad as fuck "Aughhhh what the hell is wrong with you kids now in days,sneaking up on people like,I could've killed you,...you know''his voice is muffled by the mask."Don't you kids know,it's dangerous to be around these parts around summer time,especially at night''the old man says with his raspy,low voice
"What do you mean,when you say dangerous?You mean something more creepy and,uglier than you?"Dom says,leaving his hidey hole behind the tree and, walking over,hands resting behind his head with a smirk,and confused look on his face"You damn kids better watch who you're talking,especially you.......yeah you the one with the smart ass mouth i'm talking about" Old Man said "Aye....Man fuck you I can talk smart if i want to what business do you have teling me what to do!!?" Dom yells in response I got to say I always did like when he started to talk he like he was some type of lawyer;It showed how smart of a person he really was,but it did get annoying from time to time. "Huh MMMM"I say softly in response "Can we please get to the matter at hand please?"Zac says getting up and dusting the dirt off of his clothes "Yeah,... what do you mean?"I question "You kids don't know about all the strange reports,and murders that happen here during summer''the old man says picking up his hose from the ground.I shake my head "No"I say. "Well,now is good time to know there's been strange reports,even murders around here,people who have seen or even survived what has caused this say it's horrific,some say it's a monster,but it doesn't matter now,all those people were sent to psychiatric hospitals now no one will ever believe them,well who knows maybe some people do.......now,if you young folks don't mind i'll be on my merry way''The Old man puts back on his mask and begins walking back wherever he came from whistling a playful song ."Welp thanks for the information....You crazy hag''Dom says waving at the old man "Are you glad know Zac?''I ask "Yep"he says turning around to me,with a big fake smile on his face.Ahh classic Zac he's sometimes the definition of curiosity killed the cat,brave but sometimes really dumb when it comes to logic,this is an example;It's a good thing we have Dom or,we would be getting in trouble all the time "If you guys dont mind im going back to the cabin and going to have a drink,..you guys comen or,do you want to stay here to see what that old man was talking about?'' "I'm going,fuck this shit I'm out !....''I say jogging back to the cabin "Me too"Zac says following us .We all begin to walk back to the cabin.
KAMU SEDANG MEMBACA
Dead By Dawn
Misteri / ThrillerMy first book;a scary story I decide to do for fun,who knows....people may end up liking this.
