Chapter 1

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It all started when time was my worst enemy. The time on the clock was ticking. I only had five more minutes to live. I was in the hospital living my last minutes. Then there was no more pain. There was a light, a bright light. I see the gates of heaven, I walk towards them. Then they open the gates to the meadow of light. It was peaceful, no one was there, except for me. I didn't sleep that night probably because angels don't sleep. So I watched over my family, up above the heaven clouds. A month has past and my Grandma and Grandpa have past away but, I don't not know were they were in heaven. "Why do this to me God. I don't deserve it." I say while crying. Sadness came over me, like a stroke. I couldn't help myself from sobbing. "I really want to be with my mom and dad, God" I yell up in a sob of sadness. I cried so much that the clouds around me filled up with so much tears it made a rain storm. I look at my body at the hospital. They didn't give up on me, not yet. I still had a chance to live again. My body was there resting. It was warm and bright that night. I heard a voice, it was a peaceful voice, then I heard it again. It was God, calling my name. "Mark, there's still a chance, go." I hear him say. "A chance for what?" I question. I thought more and more, then I figured it out. I could go home with my family, live again. "Is that why no ones here, is this not heaven?" I question my self. I dive down through the misty grounds and found out that I was in the clouds. I wasn't in heaven after all. So I drifted down right to my body. (Mark wakes up in the hospital) "Where am I, was that all a dream?" I wondered as I thought. "Why is the clock not moving is time frozen, am I frozen in time?" My thoughts came over me and they were stuck In my mind. Then I snapped my fingers and time unfroze, I was fine. My parents came in surprised to see me awake. Then they told me everything, like how I got shot and went into a coma " I wasn't dead I was knocked out in a coma" I thought and then I wondered "why was I out of my body I was a spirit wasn't I" I wondered more and more then I got it when I got shot my spirit must have knocked out of me and the bullet hit me in the head so that must be the reason why i can freeze time. "why god why me?" i question.  

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