The Monsters Inside Of Me

The figure

I was watching anime a few days ago when I heard a strange noise in the kitchen. I picked up the remote and paused the anime I was watching. The noise stopped as I paused it. I got up and walked to the kitchen to see what happened. As I looked around the kitchen I saw a huge black figure standing in the corner. I was too afraid to move, and I could feel it's eyes piercing through my soul. When my father pulled up in the drive way the figure dissappeared, and I was free from it's evil gaze.

I could hear my dad get out of his car, and close the door when he walked in.
"Hi dad," she says.
"Hey sweety, how are you?" He replies.
"I'm good," she says with a watchful tone.
"Are you sure?"Her father replied.
"Yes,"she says then walks away.
Madison walks to her room and closes the door. She lays on her bed and ponders what the strange figure in the kitchen was. She couldn't really put her finger on it but she thought that it was just a robber or maybe even a murder. After thinking about it for so long she fell asleep.

Hours later, she wakes up to a noise in her closet. She sits up and looks at the door way of her closet.
"What was that?" She says to herself quietly.
She sits at the side of her bed, still looking at the closet doorway. She stands and walks to the closet slowly, and as she gets closer she grabs a pocket knife. When she gets to the door she slowly opens the door, with the knife prepared in her hand. After she opens the door, she sees nothing but her clothes and cosplay. She closes the door and suddenly a chill runs down her spine.
"Huh?" She whispers as she turns around. Her eyes widen as she drips the knife to be face to face with the huge figure. Speechless, she backs away a bit and starts to slowly move away from the figure.
"What are you?" She asks.
"I'm a part of you," The figure replies with a deep demonic voice.
"What do you mean by that?" She says with fear in her voice.
"I am part of your soul," The figure replies.
"Who are you?" She asks nervously.
"I am the demon, who attached myself to your soul when you were born," He replies. "My name is Zirath," He adds.

"Zirath..." She whispers to herself in question of what his name means.

Madison's father knocks on her door.
"Madison?" Her fathers says.
She walks to the door and opens it.
"Yes dad?" She answers.
"Are you okay? You missed dinner," her father replies.
"Yes, I must have been tired and fell asleep," She answers.
"Alright, well come to the kitchen to get something to eat,* her father says.
"Okay," she replies.
She walks out of her room and goes to the kitchen. She grabs a plate and puts food on it and sits down. She grabsa fork and starts to eat.

After she finishes eating she stands up and walks to the sink. She puts the plate and the fork in the sink. Madison walks out of the kitchen and goes to the living room. She sits down on the couch and tries to relax as she starts to lay back...

(P.S.  This is my first story, so if you have any tips on what I should do for the next chapter please tell me, and let me know on what I should fix. I hope you enjoy it so far!)