here you go ladies! Another thing you MUST catch is my use of past tense.
Examples of what you're looking for:
"I can't believe you did that," Luke SAID as he LAUGHED.
"I can't help it," I JOINED him in his laughter.
Correct way to be written:
"I can't believe you did that," Luke says, laughing.
"I can't help it," I join him in his laughter.
Also, absolutely nothing about this story should change other than the mistakes that are fixed. I do not want any sentence changed unless it's due to a mistake. I understand if the mistake changes the rest of the sentence, but I will be re-reading through the chapters as you edit them, and I will know if they are changed more than planned.
Thank you for helping me. Please edit the chapters assigned to you by your twitter name.
