Poor Princess

My Life(My Sucky Life) Chapter 1:

Hi!! This is my first chapter of my first book ever!!! I hope you like it. Give me any tips on how to make it better if you want!! There will be more chapters soon.
Picture:Ollie

I hear my name coming from inside our family's little shack. "Coming," I say as I head inside dreadfully. I already know what my mom is going to say. "Stop being so sad," , "Being poor isn't that bad." I walk into the house and I see my mom doing the dishes like usual and my brother drawing you might notice I didn't say I had a dad, it's because well he's dead. "How can I not be sad or depressed?!" My life is fucking depressing! I said under my breath. Luckily no one heard me.
I walk over to see what my brother is drawing. To me it looks like a wealthy family and a dog. Well that's sad. "What are you doing," I ask him.
"Drawing how I wish our family was," he said sadly. God dammit I think. "Oh ok," I say awkwardly. I go back to my room. Actually me and my brother share it. My moms brother built us bunk beds so we can have our own beds. I of course took the top. I got my book and went up to the top bunk. I fell asleep after a hour of reading. I really didn't want to get up. I would rather just bring food to my room and hibernate. Why can't I be a bear! I did get up eventually. When I did everyone was already awake.
"Good morning, breakfast is on the table," said my mom when I came into the kitchen. There was toast and eggs on the table. I quickly ate then ran to my room to get dressed. My cat was already in there when I walked in(did I mention I had a cat, well I do.) I put on my usual outfit, skinny jeans, baggy t-shirt or a flannel, and a beanie because my hair is always a mess. I didn't have to get dressed because it was Saturday but I feel a little productive when I'm dressed. "Olive! Come do your chores," I hear my mom say from the dining room. My real name is Olive but the few friends I have call me Ollie.
Speaking of friends, I don't have that many. My bestest friend is Jean. He is the gayest boy you will ever meet!! He has a boyfriend named Griffin, we call him Griffey for short even thought he doesn't like it! My other best friend is Kendal(Kenny for short). I have known her since I was born. We were born in the same hospital! Then there is my crush, Laine. I have liked him since he moved to my school. He's really tall!! We like a lot of the same things, I guess you could call him perfect(even though no one is perfect.)
After I did my chores I got to go over to Jean's house. He isn't as poor as me put he isn't the richest but he is smart so that makes up for it. When I got there I went strait to his room. When I walked in he was pacing back and forth in the middle of his room then he said
"I'm moving to Washington!"

Thank you for reading!! There will be more chapters soon. Please give me feed back!! Any questions you have I will try to answer them next chapter!