Guys is my story boring? pls should I stop writing? hello pls comment on my story so that I could make it interesting
My previous Chaps are good I mean interesting??
Mary(Robert's sister in law) was killed by the same people who killed her husband David. Robert learned that a man Gary was behind the case,and went on search of Gary,who wanted revenge against his family. He discovered that it was Inspector James (a good family friend to his family) who helped them in any cases of crimes ,who both killed Mary and David ,the Inspector was indeed Gary. Hassam was aware of Gary's truth,but Gary sent him to the mental asylum and used shock treatment on him to make him forget everything.
That led Hassam's mind to become that of 7_year old's. After much trouble Robert got Gary arrested,but Hassam nearly got suffocated whilst being buried alive by Gary's men,but Robert saved him and used shock treatment to resuscitate him. As a result, Hassam gained his memory back and tried to get Isabella back again. Everyone later realised that Hassam gained his memory,so Robert took back to jail. But they got attacked on their way by some goons and while fighting with them, Robert got shot and dies while saying Isabella's name. Hassam got all the blame for his murder.....
YOU ARE READING
Justice
RomanceJustice is a story about the struggle of Sara,who faced with any girl's worst fears_an over possessive and abusive husband,Hassam. To the outside world,Hassam was charming and dashing,at home he was different man. So guys read the story and find out...
