whirlwind (bxb)

chapter 1

hi guys this is totally my first attempt, please read my description if you think i should go on just let me know, and any advice is welcomed with open arms.

Ok here it goes, breathing in and out. ..

Oh well I guess new environment is not such a bad thing especially in the city, just happy I'm not doing some heavy labour on this moving business, agh I'm going to miss the guys, partying and the occasional getting high, don't get me wrong I'm not a druggie, just some light weed here and there...

"Ben why are there still boxes unpacked, it's been 3 whole days" , agh ladies and gentlemen that's gotta be my mom Mrs Lauryn Mollet,such a neat freak "mooom, please I'm still trying to get the feel of the place, you know getting some spiritual guidance on where everything should go" , "don't make me regret getting you your own place Benedict, this move is for you to start growing up and be responsible, don't you dare think I enjoy keeping an eye on you " , "mom calling me by my full name ain't gonna help you to make me move faster" "just clean this up and be ready for your classes tomorrow, I'll be out of town for the week, I better see some new changes when I come back" she walks out to the door, her heels clicking on the tile and slams the door, 'agh that woman likes making a statement'

I walk to my new messed up bedroom, well so glad I convinced mom to not make me stay at the dorm, I totally like my own space, I walk to my back pack and pull out my laptop to fire up on some games. My phone rings and I yawn while picking it up without checking who it is "hello" "hey Benni, what's up man how's the new place, seen some hot chikaz yet?" That is Harvey my best friend from my home town or should I say old hometown "hey man, I've got a new wicked apartment but haven't got the feel of the place, guess will see tomorrow, first day of classes and all, well for me atleast " , "oh well , new place for paaarrrties, wicked, well man don't get some new buddies and be a stranger " looking at the clock "flip Harv I gotta crash, don't wanna be late or looking like a zombie on my first day and no to you ill never be a stranger " , "cool, alright night man" "night Harv"

Well let me get some sleep, for I'm not sure what hell is awaiting me tomorrow.
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Well there's the first trial guys, please comment and let me know what you think. ..