Ok first story no hate please but please give me positive feedback on how I can improve.
Annabeth's POV
I was ecstatic...I got to go to New York and go to high school with my Seaweed Brain!!! I was going to live in a monster proof house created by the gods. I was going with the rest of the 7 + Nico, Reyna, Thalia, Connor,Travis, Katie, Miranda, Grover, Juniper and Taylor a daughter of Hecate.
Percy didn't know that we were coming yet but Sally and Paul did. We were leaving in a few days.
-----------------I'm time skipping to when they're about to leave because you probably don't want me to explain them packing--------------------------------------------
We were all at Thalia's tree waiting for Argus to bring the van around. Supposedly the school and our house was "monster proof". When argus finally got there the seating arrangement was:
Argus Me Thalia
Grover Juniper Chris Clarrise
Frank Hazel Taylor Leo
Piper Jason Nico Reyna
Katie Travis Connor Miranda
Since Leo, Taylor, Thalia and I were the only ones without a significant other Thalia and I sat in the front. It was so obvious that Leo and Taylor liked each other.
Nico's POV (just cause)
I was sitting next to Jason and Piper in the back...they were making out the whole time. I tried to start a conversation with Reyna but it got really awkward really soon. I just sat down and tried to just disappear since I didn't really have any other options.
Annabeth's POV
It was only like a 45 minute drive and I was bouncing up and down the whole time. "You are such a lovesick puppy." Said Thalia.
"Am not!!!!" I almost screamed
"Then why are you bouncing up and down like a lovesick puppy?" She said with a smirk ok her face. I slouched realizing she was right (I hate it when I'm not the one who's right) luckily she was one of the only people who could say I'm wrong because I'm usually right...get back on track stupid ADHD. But we were almost there and I could already see the house it was huge....
Ok hoped you liked it please give me positive feedback. First story no hate.
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