He nodded, stepping a little closer, lowering his tone as if sharing a secret. "I need someone to listen. Just listen. No judgment, no questions... just someone who will hear me out."
Her stomach tightened. Something about the request was strange, almost desperate, yet compelling. She hesitated, glancing around the empty store, then back at him. There was a raw honesty in his eyes, a kind of burden that seemed impossible to ignore.
Rosie took a cautious breath. "And why... me?" she asked quietly, her curiosity cautiously rising above her wariness.
The man looked down briefly, rubbing the back of his neck, then back at her. "Because... you're here. You're the only one here. And maybe... you're the only one who'll hear me without running away."
The weight of his words hung between them, heavy and unsettling, but Rosie felt the spark of something she hadn't felt in a long time—a sense of purpose, however small, in simply being there.
Rosie took a slow, steadying breath, trying to calm the fluttering of unease in her chest. She glanced around the empty store once more, then back at the man.
"...Alright," she said softly. "I'll listen. But just... listen."
His eyes flickered with a faint relief, though his posture remained tense. He nodded once, then gestured toward a small corner of the store. "Sit there... please. I won't take up too much of your time."
Rosie hesitated a moment longer, then walked over and perched on the edge of a low shelf, careful not to make a sound. The fluorescent lights above hummed softly, filling the quiet space between them.
The man in black took a slow breath, leaning against the counter. "I don't even know where to begin..." he murmured, his voice low, heavy with unspoken burden. "It's... complicated. Everything I've done, everything I've lost... it's like a weight I can't shake. I don't have anyone who'll hear me without judgment... until now."
Rosie stayed silent, her hands resting in her lap. She didn't interrupt. She didn't react. She simply listened, the faint hum of the store wrapping around them, as if the world outside had paused to leave this moment untouched.
For the first time that day, and perhaps the first time in a long while, Rosie's own worries—the factory, her family, her fatigue—seemed to fade into the background. Here, she was simply a listener. And in that small act, something inside her shifted, a fragile connection forming between two weary souls.
The man leaned a little closer, his elbows resting on the counter as his gaze dropped to the floor. His voice was quiet, almost a whisper, but every word carried a weight that made Rosie's chest tighten.
"Lately... I don't feel right," he began, his tone raw, tinged with frustration and sorrow. "Every day I wake up, I think I'm not good enough. Not for anyone, not for anything. No matter what I do, it's never enough... and it's exhausting. Sometimes I wonder if I even deserve the life I have, or if I've already ruined it too much to matter."
Rosie's fingers tightened slightly in her lap, but she didn't speak. She simply listened, letting him pour out the torrent of emotions he had been holding in.
"I look around," he continued, his voice cracking faintly, "and I see people moving on, living... achieving things I'll never reach. And yet I keep trying, keep fighting this invisible battle inside me, hoping that someday... maybe someday, I'll feel like I'm enough. But most days... it feels impossible."
He paused, taking a slow breath, eyes lifting briefly to meet hers. There was a vulnerability there, raw and unguarded, that made Rosie's own heart ache. She realized, with a strange clarity, that he wasn't asking for advice or sympathy—he simply needed someone to witness his struggle, someone to hear him without judgment.
Rosie stayed still, her hands resting loosely in her lap. She didn't speak, didn't offer advice or try to comfort him. She simply listened, letting the weight of his words settle around them.
Her gaze softened slightly as she watched him wrestle with his own torment, and though she said nothing, her silence carried a quiet acknowledgment: she was present, she was paying attention, and she wasn't going anywhere.
For a moment, the store seemed to shrink around them, leaving just the two of them and the fragile bridge of trust forming in the stillness. The hum of the refrigerators, the flicker of the fluorescent lights above, even the faint creak of the floor beneath their feet—all became background to this unspoken connection.
She sensed that this silence, this act of simply being there, was exactly what he needed. And in a strange, quiet way, it gave her a sense of purpose she hadn't felt in a long time—an anchor in the monotony and weight of her own life.
The man ran a hand through his hair, letting out a long, shaky breath. "I... I just needed to get that out," he said quietly, almost as if confessing a guilty thought. "I'm sorry for unloading all of this on you so suddenly. It's... probably overwhelming, and I didn't mean to drag you into it."
Rosie remained silent, her expression calm, her presence steady. She didn't interrupt or try to soothe him—she simply let him speak, allowing him the space he seemed to desperately need.
He swallowed hard, his voice softening. "Do you... think it's alright if I come back sometime? Just... to rant, to speak, without expecting anything from you except... listening?"
Her eyes met his briefly, unflinching, and though she didn't say a word, her quiet attentiveness seemed to answer him. A faint, almost imperceptible nod from her, or perhaps just the act of staying silent and present, was enough for him.
He let out another sigh of relief, leaning slightly against the counter, his shoulders loosening for the first time since he had arrived. "Thank you... for listening," he murmured, his voice low, filled with gratitude and lingering tension.
The man finally straightened, his hands brushing over the counter as if to shake off the lingering tension. He gave Rosie a small, almost hesitant nod.
"I should go... before it gets too late," he murmured. He reached into his pocket, pulled out his watch, and glanced at it briefly. Then, almost as an afterthought, he added softly, "And... be careful going home, alright? Don't take any unnecessary risks."
Rosie didn't move, didn't speak—she simply watched as he made his way to the door. The bell jingled softly as he stepped out into the night, his figure retreating into the dim glow of the streetlights.
She remained seated in the quiet store, the soft hum of the refrigerators filling the silence once more. Her mind lingered on his words, his concern, and the strange weight of his presence. For a fleeting moment, the monotony of her day, the fatigue of her double shift, and the lingering ache of her life at home all seemed to fade, replaced by a quiet, uneasy curiosity—and something else she hadn't expected: a subtle, fragile sense of connection.
Rosie finally stood, stretching her stiff limbs as she grabbed her bag. The store was silent behind her, the faint hum of the refrigerators fading as she stepped out into the cool night air. The streets were nearly empty, the dim streetlights casting long shadows along the pavement.
Stepping into her house, Rosie was immediately met with the familiar chaos: her father still passed out from drinking, and her younger brother stumbling in, reeking of alcohol. A familiar tightness gripped her chest, the frustration and weariness of the day pressing down harder than ever.
She paused for a moment, taking a slow breath, remembering the stranger's words: "Be careful going home..." The memory brought a small, fleeting steadiness amidst the turmoil. With quiet resolve, she moved past the mess, bracing herself for another night in the same worn, heavy routine—carrying the weight of her home, her exhaustion, and the faint, fragile trace of connection she hadn't expected tonight.
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Against Every Odd
RomanceRosie, an 18-year-old girl has already survived more than most people face in a lifetime. Born into a life steeped in danger and whispered secrets, she's trapped between a father who gambles and drinks away their future, the memory of a mother who c...
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