Well I am still new in writing this story, so any comment would be nice please, although if it criticism at least try to say it nicely, because in my other story someone said it in a really mean way so please at least don’t make it sound that bad so it won’t hurt as much.
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Chapter 1 Lavi meets Rafael (Rafe)
Lavi point of view.
Nightmare, flashback of Lavi past.
“Oh God, stop, please, AHHH, Lavi, look away!” The females tone held pain and tears.
“Mommy, I’m scared.” A young boys voice whimpered.
“It going to be okay son, just listen to your mother, look away.” A mans voice pleaded with his son to not watch the horror unfolding. Again.
“Daddy, what are they doing to mommy?” The whole scene was burning into the boys mind.
“Close your eyes son, don’t look over here!” His dad ordered, but couldn't move to make his son obey.
“AHHH, stop it please, my child is right there.” The woman's pleas were in vain.
“Like I care, shut up and take it like the bitch you are.” Malice came from the voice.
“DEAR GOD! Lavi look away!” Dad''s voice panic.
“Daddy what are they doing to mommy? She keeps screaming, it's scary.” I still didn't get that they were hurting her in the worst way possible.
“Where do you think you’re going, you deserve the same treatment!” Another male grab my dad, when he tried to crawl towards me.
“Get your hands off me!” Dad voice showed his anger.
“Daddy….”
Whipping sounds could be heard, a male and females cries were following each whip.
“You hear that kid?” Hard, cold male hands grab my face.”That's the sound of your parents screaming.”
“Stop…leave my child alone.” A female voice was heard, but you could tell the women was holding back tears even through her voice.
“I said shut up bitch!” A hard hitting sound came, making the women cry out from the pain.
“Mommy help…” I whimpered again.
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"The demon who fallen in love with the demon slayer" (Boy x Boy)
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