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(( The eggs point of view ))
So much has happened.. I can't see much, only a few inches outside, but I can tell a lot happened. At first all I saw was faint light, then the beasts the crawled in front of me.... Scorpions. That's what their called. Then the creatures who came and took care of me.. I felt so happy. Then I was shaked about and lifted into the air, something wrapped around me and tried taking me away, I was so scared, I still am. Not so much anymore, with one of the nice creatures by me.
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((Nyinx's point of view))
Me and Chiacao were walking by the stream when we saw that little annoying bunch of scales, Maliva, get some moss and carry it into a cave, she must have not seen us. Though, I ignored it for now and said to Chiacao, "Bet I can fly better than you!" I sneered. She replied, Like I know she would, "Your on!" We both engaged in a flying contest, flying through hills and trees.
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The only one
FantasyIn a world of darkness and danger, life is cruel. But the creatures that live there are crueler, the most feared of them all? Dragons, but not anymore. A new creature has emerged from this darkness, The only one. (( I'm planning on making this a com...
