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~Best Debut Writing Results ~

A big thanks to all the participants and especially to our judge _abhipreeti_ .

To all the participants, don't get disheartened even if you don't win. Keep writing ✍️.

All participants please give our sincere thanks to our judge.

Honorable Mentions

“You Are My Peace” by The_Book_Library

Brief Review: As a debut writer, you did good but it could be even better if you write it in a rather descriptive manner but descriptive in the sense that words should blend naturally, and invoke emotions to the readers. Right, the words appeared rather informative and abrupt to me (Her age is this. He received a message, etc.).There are also certain grammatical errors which should be taken care of.

“Destined love: a tale of arranged serendipity” by Katherinekeller1

Brief Review: You have a good sense of vocabulary and grammar but it needs to be improved more. I could not read a few sentences because of the presence of grammatical errors. but from my understanding, the formatting and layout of the chapters is lacking a
bit. For example, in some dialogues, the first alphabet of the first word is not capitalized. Using the word “Ok” which should either be “Okay” or “OK” (that is, if you decide to use the short form of “okay”, make sure you are capitalizing both the letters). Then next comes
the punctuation. The lack of usage of commas exists in your book. Use of apostrophe “s” in necessary places must be done. Try avoiding writing sounds “Knock, Knock” within double inverted commas as it creates a confusion as to whether it is a dialogue being said by a
character or just the expression of a sound.

3rd Place

“Cataract Of Delusion” by new_erasktaylor

Brief Review: You have a readable writing style. Yes there were a few punctuation and grammatical errors which can be easily solved with editing, otherwise, good job on your debut work.

2nd Place

“Winter’s Solace” by sparklet11

Brief Review: Literally, no words. I am not even sure what I am supposed to write in the review because your writing skill is THAT good. The writing skill was enough to catch my
attention. Good work!

1st Place

“Bond Breakers” by JoeyW2W

Brief Review: What I really liked about your writing style is that it is descriptive, which is not usually seen nowadays in Wattpad books. Keep writing, you have the potential to shine
brighter. In fact, I am surprised to see that this is your debut book. Keep it up!

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