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This is obviously the first draft so when we have a chance to act it out we can time it/ change anything too long.

I tried to keep it as close as I could to our original plan so I still have the romance references and Victorian school setting (so no one's research has to change). As you'll see, I added a whole chunk related to religion and changed the way they speak to make it historically accurate. 

However, I did get rid of the running about with the book bit :(

Therefore in my head, to assist the new way the characters don't chase BOY when making fun of him, Harriet stays as TEACHER, Bella and Emily still being the schoolboys. Please object if you disagree :D

Enjoy, and comment your thoughts on it as a whole, (so effective stuff that's theatre-ish for marks/non-effective things that mightn't gain marks) and also your ideas for the blocking so we can discuss!!!

P.s. do ask about any funny Victorian words- there's one I LOVE!

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