Hi guys kyase ho aap sab?
Hume na ek help chahiye aap sab se..
Karenge?
Humne bohot sari recreation padh liye mission bahurupiya ka..
Specially last scene ka jaha kareena ne anubhav Singh ko goli Mari...
90% log bol ek tarfa likh rhe hai..
Anubhav Singh ko hero aur kareena ko villain bana rhe hai..
Haa mante hai iye jo pura scene tha woh bohot galat tha...
Iye pura scene ka koi sense hi nhi tha..
Mante hai.. ho sakta hai anubhav Singh galat nhi tha.. woh nirdosh tha.. lekin unhone gunha Kiya hai..
Unhone hm ki ammi ko kidnap kiya aur usko behoshi ki injection di..
Usne hm ko kya bola mein tujhe tab tak goli Marta rahunga jab tak Teri pran na nikal Jaye..
Usne apni hi behen ko marne gaye.. usko banduk se markar behosh kiya...
Usne apni hi behen ki wardi utarwana chaha..
Kya iye sab sahi tha? Aap log hi bataiye..
Last mein usne hm ko goli marke uska yaad kho diya..
Iye sahi Kiya unhone? Thoda idhar udhar hota to goli sidha hm ki dil par jakar lagta..
Kya iye Saab sahi kiya atha unhone?
Lekin iye log sab story likh rhe hai ki anubhav accha hai begunha hai aur kareena gunhegar..
Aab hum bhi ek story likhna chahte hai..
Jyada bada nhi.. short story..
Jaha koi partiality nhi hoga...
Koi akela hero nhi koi akela villain nhi..
Dono badabad hoga..
To hum aap logo se chota sa help chahiye..
Hume suggestions chahiye...
I repeat no partiality..
Dono ka badabad hona chahiye..
Pls hume suggestions dijiye...
Hum likhna chahte hai...
Pls...
Your writer - haseenakarishma
