Title:Demi
Author:pinpopper
Genre:Fantasy/Mystery
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Back again
To the Author I am so sorry I haven't posted this since been in my draft for a while
U wanted some criticism
Well would I say there is anything wrong with the book to me no
I mean your English is quite nice
Buh I would have loved like a prologue or something (just saying)
And your chapters are not short and ....like most new authors so that is quite impressive.
You just need the right audience and I am sure people would love your book
Also it may seem hard but readers don't like to be left hanging so an update would be fine.
My overall rate 😬I would give this book a 7 out of ten
Hope to see more of your work🧡pinpopper
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