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I am updating stories regularly but getting very less votes and reviews.. so I wanted to ask are my stories boring?
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Karan woke up and sat on bed stretching his hands
The flashes of last night ran in his mind and he sighs heavily
Preeta (sighs): Thik hai agar tumhe meri baato par bharosa nahi hai thik hai.. par jis din mujhe uske khilaf saboot mil gaye tumhe meri har baat pe yakeen ho jayega and remember uske baad tum mujhse ketni v maafi maang lo mai tumhe maaf nahi karungi.. humesa k liye tumhari life se chali jaungi.. and I know you will be happy with that
Karan: Nahi pata kya ho raha hai mere saath ku Preeta k yaha se jaane ki baat sunn k etna bura lag raha hai mujhe.. kal toh maine uski wajah se Aashi se v bohot rudely baat ki.. uske face pe aise darwaza v band kar diya.. ketna bura laga hoga use.. mujhe.. mujhe usse maafi mangni chahiye.. aaj hi practice k baad uske ghar chale jaunga usse maafi mangne
He stood up form the bed and went to get fresh
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Karan came downstairs getting ready and looked at everyone having breakfast
His eyes went towards Preeta who was seating beside Arjun and both were whispering something.. he narrowed his eyes at them
He went towards the breakfast table and sat beside Risabh
All smiled seeing him and wished him good morning but he was busy glaring at Preeta and Arjun
Rishabh looked at him glaring Arjun and Preeta.. he giggles slowly sensing his jealousy
Rishabh: Karan..
Karan looked at him
Karan: Kya hai bakk naa
Rishabh: Aree yeh kya tareeka hai apne bade bhai se baat karne kaa.. aur tujhe kya hua ku etna sada hua muh bana rakha hai subha subha (in order to tease him)
Karan: Jab subha subha sade hue logo ka muh dekhunga.. toh mood v sada sada rahega naa
Rishabh (controlling his laugh): Kaun... kaun hai yaha sada hua.. kahi tu Preeta ji k Arjun ki baat toh nahi kar raha
Karan (glaring him): Nahi teri sabse bada sadu toh tu hai tu.. devdas kahi kaa.. acche se pata hai mujhe tu kya karne ki koshish kar raha hai.. chup chap naa apna nasta thus aur muh band rakh (mummers) bada aaya Preeta jii ka Arjun kehne waala
And Rishabh's all laughter died listenin by getting brutality insulted by his small brother
And as Karan he started focusing on his breakfast.. as he knew no one except Preeta can beat The Karan Luthra on arguing
Sherlyn who was listening to them was giggling slowly..
Sherlyn (to Rishabh): Aa gaya maza apne chote bhai se apni insult karwa k.. aur chedo mere dever ko.. abb se mai v tumhe sadu khaungi (giggles)
Rishabh looked at her and then looked upwards
Risabh (in mind): Bhagwan yeh devdas ka kalank kab hate gaa mujhse.. koi toh meri v izzat karne waala hona chahiye naa hi chota bhai meri izzat karta hai naahi meri biwi.. kya paap kiya hai maine
Preeta (whispers to Arjun): Tu yeh karne mai etna dar ku raha hai yaar.. ketna fattu hai tu
Arjun (whispers back): Mai koi fattu nahi hu par kisi k ghar mai v aise chori chupke jaana gunah hai.. agar usne police mai complaint kar di naa.. toh bohot bura phasenge hum dono
Preeta: Aree kuch nahi hoga.. college mai v toh humne kai aise kaam kiye hai.. kabhi phase kya hum.. are humne toh principal ki girlfriend k baare mai unki wife ko aur pure college ko v bata diya tha aur hai.. buddhe ko aaj tak pata nahi chala ki woh humne kiya tha.. (dreamly) haaye ketna maza aaya tha naa yeh karne mai.. saare badle le liye maine uss buddhe se
