Critique Shop [TEMPORARILY CLOSED]

Rules

1.) Be patient.
I'm a busy person so please be patient.

2.) Your story must be English, Tagalog, or both.
I'm a Filipino who only speaks a few languages, so please bear with me.

3.) There is no "First come, first served" policy. 
It depends on your ability to make the payments. (Go to the next page to see the payments.) 

4.) Respect my opinions/feedbacks about your story.
As an author, you should be open to hearing opinions about your story.

5.) Your story must consist 5 or more chapters. 
I'll only read 5 chapters but I'm going to continue if I'll like it. 

6.) One Shot stories are available.
If your story is not a One Shot Story, it should have more than 5 chapters.