1. The writing has incorporated swearing words (which according to portrayal of gangster life, are not that much harsh to speak as apparently they use phrases and sentences to enhance their creative cursing and screwing skills) but that would be too harsh if I had to include, so I just remained content for the usual EFF words.*moreover a gangster not using them, doesn't feel like real drug dealer.
2. I would discourage the idea of traditional boy-girl feeling while Alex and Birdy had their conversations.
3. You might wonder Alex and Birdy are trying to save each other for what they meant to each other during all those years (and yes at some point I did use lines she knew someone who knew her more than herself) but NO. My point here is "Can't a human just wish to save other human out of their prisons without any strings attached?" *remember the ending again what they did for earthlings.
4. I have tried my UTMOST NOT TO INCLUDE ANY FEELINGS OR EMOTIONAL DIALOGUES. (here's why : Maybe I am stereotyping women. I think men, they only like to gaze upon what is going on and they love reading only if it is physical read like a construct. They like to judge the feelings or emotions in their own way so I didn't have to push reader. I guess the feeling part or job, I have left for reader to interpret on his own/her own). Wanna know is there any more interpretation to story according to me? Read next point
5. The idea of music can be replaced by anything like their Past or their relation to God.*recall how many times they turned away from music and then embraced it. Gotti's turning radio off in car, then shutting down beethoveen tape, not caring about the violin no matter how many times it fell etc etc...
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The Design Chaos
Short StoryA story of a convict Gotti trying to justify his actions. Who faces some sort of glitch in universe that will change his life forever....A random story for what happened and where are we headed... A short ride of What is the extent of our will and w...
