Campfire Awards 2.0 [COMPLETE]

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Welcome to the second edition of Campfire Awards 2.0! I hope you enjoy this award and remember that the award is just for fun. Genres seen in this award. Young Adult Chicklit Fantasy Historial Fiction Humor Vampire Werewolf Short Story Status of t...

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by Amethyst_Alveres

This blurb hooked me perfectly and had just the right enough information to do so.

Plot Development: 13/15

I love the plot, but I'm a little confused about why the MC chose to go to the party even while having so many doubts about the bite. Other than that, I love it!

Character Development: 9/10

I think the characters are well-written. Though their actions are sometimes questionable, I think they each are their own distinct person!

Grammar & Puncuation: 4/5

I found a few mistakes, involving word use, spelling, and commas.

Overall Enjoyment: 20/20

I enjoyed everything about this story!

TOTAL: 66/70

*2nd place*

Book: Freeing Anvi

Author: romance_lover16

Book Cover & Title: 7/10

While I love the title, the cover could use some improvements. It could be better to make it seem more werewolf-like rather than just a girl's silhouette because that could be any genre.

Blurb: 10/10

You gave the right amount of information that definitely hooked me. Well done!

Plot Development: 14/15

I think the beginning spent a little too much time at the ball. All of that could have just been one chapter and the scenes could have been condensed just a bit. This keeps the readers interested in the story and doesn't bore them. Staying in one place for too long without need could cause them to lose interest. Otherwise, the plot was amazing!

Character Development: 10/10

All the characters are great and well-established. They all have their own quirks and motivations. None of them are alike, which I love!

Grammar & Puncuation: 4/5

There were only some comma mistakes and a few comma splices.

Overall Enjoyment: 20/20

I enjoyed this A LOT! Like, there are no words. Totally continuing this book!

TOTAL: 65/70

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