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Welcome to the second edition of Campfire Awards 2.0! I hope you enjoy this award and remember that the award is just for fun. Genres seen in this award. Young Adult Chicklit Fantasy Historial Fiction Humor Vampire Werewolf Short Story Status of t...

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by Amethyst_Alveres

*2nd place*

Book: Blood Tint on a Black Rose

Author: Nefelibatas_world

Book cover and title: [10/10]

Blurb: [9/10]

Plot development: [13/15]

Character development: [8/10]

Grammar and punctuation: [5/5]

Overall enjoyment: [18/20]

Total score: [63/70]

Review: Happy to see a fan fiction of my kind under this category, 'cause usually they go under a separate category and I never really get to judge one under mine. Really liked the way you used your words in drawing beautiful, descriptive imagery; for example, the rain description in the first chapter. But at some points, you were a little straightforward in stating things than letting the tension keep your reader on the edge for a bit. Like maybe you were in an unnecessary rush or something? You may need to work on that, I suggest. By the way, nice cover. I liked it. Good Luck.

*1st place*

Book: Keen's Turn: The Vampire's Appeal

Author: MelainaBlanc

Book cover and title: [9/10]

Blurb: [10/10]

Plot development: [15/15]

Character development: [10/10]

Grammar and punctuation: [5/5]

Overall enjoyment: [18/20]

Total score: [67/70]

Review: Rich language; that's the first thing I noted about this book. The scenes were very vividly described and might I add the skillful usage of puns?. I barely have anything to complain about. Yet I would like to suggest you a cover upgrade cause you know people, no matter how hard you try to deny it, tend to judge the book by its cover. I think that will help to attract more readers to your book. Apart from that everything else about the book was rather impressive. I may even return to read the rest of the story if I get some free time in the future. Good Luck.

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