Campfire Awards 2.0 [COMPLETE]

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Welcome to the second edition of Campfire Awards 2.0! I hope you enjoy this award and remember that the award is just for fun. Genres seen in this award. Young Adult Chicklit Fantasy Historial Fiction Humor Vampire Werewolf Short Story Status of t...

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Fantasy Results

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by Amethyst_Alveres

Blurb: 9/10

While reading this blurb, it felt like something was missing. The blurb needs a bit more descriptiveness I think. Though, I do like the blunt vibe you're going for because it fits the story well.

Plot Development: 13/15

My problem with the plot is that "A Deal with the Wolves" is placed before "A Dance with a Druid" even though it chronologically takes place after the following chapter. Other than that, the plot runs smoothly!

Character Development: 10/10

I love the characters and how they interact. I like how all the characters are different and there are no two alike. You did a great job with these characters and their introductions were wonderful!

Grammar & Puncuation: 3/5

The main problems with this were the structure and words used in some of the sentences/paragraphs. There were also a few grammatical errors that need fixing.

Overall Enjoyment: 20/20

I love this book so much! Like, everything about it just screams medieval and fantasy, two things I love so freaking much! So, yes, it's safe to say that I fully enjoyed reading his.

TOTAL: 64.5/70

*2nd place*

Book: The Kingmaker

Author: YouCanCallMeCorn

Book Cover & Title: 10/10

The cover is just... AMAZING! Totally gives me that wow factor! And I didn't understand the title at first, but it becomes clear later on!

Blurb: 6/10

While the blurb is very, very short, it does tell all that should be. But, I think it would be much more attractive to add in some more descriptions of plot and characters.