Girl in tough times

The beginning

She sat for hours waiting for the only person she had to talk to, to get off of work, she was a troubled girl who kept to herself and only had a few friends, one of which she actually talked to, she rarely got out of her house and when she did it wasn't for more than a few hours, she never wanted to go back home because her father was awful and the house made her feel unhappy, when she got home he father yelled at her "MARS GET THESE DAMN DISHES DONE NOW" so she did the dishes and then went up to her room and texted her boyfriend, he had been acting weird today and she was concerned "hey love, hows your day going?" She waited for hours for a reply and never got one, she eventually went to bed and hoped the next day would be better, she's a troubled 17 year old girl and almost no one knew what was going through her mind.

A/n If you guys have any advice or suggestions on what you think would make this story better let me know please 😁