The story starts at the Lor Starcutter, where Taranza and Susie just left after spending the day with Magolor
Magolor: See you tomorrow, guys.
Taranza & Susie: Bye!
Meanwhile they were walking towards their houses
Taranza: Hey Susie, do you think Magolor looks a bit... Different in these days?
Susie: I'm glad you asked. I was thinking the same thing, he looks always distracted, like if he's thinking about something and sometimes he does not even realize what's happening around him...
Taranza: Tomorrow I'll invite him at my house, I'll ask him something while drinking some tea... Just to make it as calm as possible
Susie: Alright then, see you, Taranza
Taranza: Bye!
The tomorrow afternoon
Magolor: How nice of you invite me here, I don't come here very often...
Taranza: Here, take a seat, I also made some tea!
Magolor: I'm wondering... What's the matter of this?
Taranza was about to drink his cup of tea
Taranza: "This" what?
Magolor: You know... You don't really invite people that much here, also you didn't invite anyone else but me, what's the matter?
Taranza: You see... I've noticed you look a bit distracted these days, like if there's something bothering you, you want to talk about it?...
Magolor: Oh, that...
Magolor looked away
Magolor: It's... It's nothing, I just feel a bit tired, that is all.
Taranza: A bit tired for whole weeks?
Magolor did not answer to that
Taranza: I know there's something more, Magolor, me and Susie are worried about you
Magolor: If I said it's nothing, it's nothing alright?
Taranza got up
Taranza: You know you can talk to us, Mags! It's not like we'd judge you or anything, we are your friends, we will understand!
Magolor: Ugh... You're making a scene for nothing! I need to go now, bye!
Taranza did not like that
Taranza: FINE. GO ALONE TO YOUR STARCUTTER AND GO CRY ABOUT YOUR STUPID PROBLEMS, WE COULD HELP YOU, BUT YOU'RE TOO AFRAID TO ASK-
Taranza covered his mouth, realizing he actually yelled at his friends
Taranza: I'm... I'm sorry...! I d-did not mean to s-say it like that...!
Taranza was about to cry [he's too pure, poor spooder boi]
Magolor: Hey hey! It's fine, don't cry, I understand you just want to help... But this isn't something you guys can deal with, is something I must solve alone... I'm leaving now
Magolor left Taranza's house, without finishing drinking his tea
Susie showed up
Susie: Hey, I saw Magolor leave, how did it go?
Taranza whiped off a few tears
Taranza: Not really well...
Susie: So, you want me to go talk to him?
Taranza: I think he's not in the mood right now...
Susie: Hm... I'll go anyways
Later, at the Lor
Susie knocked on the door and Magolor opened
Magolor: What do you need Susie? Is not the best moment...
Susie: Oh, nothing, I just wanted to spend some time with you. So I brought you some cookies!
Susie handed a light pink box full of cookies to Magolor
Susie: May I come in?
Magolor sighed
Magolor: Fine.
Magolor and Susie sat on the couch [Yes, the Lor does have a couch here, don't ask]
Magolor: Since something similar happened with Taranza before... I wonder if you want me to talk about something
Susie: Oh! How rude! Don't you want the company of a friend?
Magolor: The thing is, you don't usually spend time just with me, we usually have someone else too to stay with
Susie, to herself: Okay, the plan is failing, find an excuse, quickly...
Susie: Umm... I just want to stay a bit with you...?
Magolor: And why?
Susie: Damn it, Magolor we're friend! Is it so weird to want to spend time with a friend?
Magolor: You're acting like I don't know you and Taranza are planning something... I know you think there's something that worries me, but I am fine, just don't mind it.
Susie: Hmph... Promise me is nothing serious...
Magolor: You know I am not good with promises.
Susie: Mags, please. You know me and Taranza care about you! If there's something that bothers you just tell me, we can go trough it together!
Magolor looked annoyed
Magolor: You want me to talk? Fine! You remember what I did to Kirby when we met, right?
Susie: Yeah, the crown possessed you and you tricked Kirby to-
Magolor: THAT'S THE THING! The crown did not control me! I wanted the power on porpuse. I tricked Kirby on porpuse. I did all of that because I wanted to.
Susie: W-what's the problem...? You changed now!
Magolor: And that's wrong. I did not change, I still want that power... I still want to rule the Galaxy, Susie, but I would just die while trying...
Susie: Oh... Well that changes the situation
Magolor: I just- I just did not want to tell anyone because they think I am a good guy now.
Susie took Magolor's hands
Susie: You're saying you would betray Kirby again?
Magolor: No... I see him as a real friend now
Susie: So that's fine, for now! If you want we can keep this as a secret, I won't tell this even to Taranza, if it's better for you
Magolor: Well, thanks Susie. I really needed to talk to someone...
Susie: Maybe is better if I go now, see you!
Magolor: Bye Susie...
Susie left the Lor, and Magolor looked at the box of cookies... That disappeared?
Magolor: How-?
Marx was sitting next to him while eating the cookies, and he did not even noticed him
Marx Hey pal, so you're still evil?
Magolor: WHAT THE-
[And the first chapter is done of this new story. Please don't expect too much from this one, is more like an experiment than a story]
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[Discontinued] Villain Syndrome
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