P confessed & A's breakdown

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[1/11]Next day
M reaches to P's cabin - hii bro
P - hi , tum yha
M - hn m yha , abto apna milna lga hi rhega bro so sorry sadu sahab
P - what non sense
M - are yrr tum G ke bf m S ka to hmari shadi unse hogi to yhi relation bnega na
P- shut up m G se shadi nhi krnewala or na S se tumhari hone duga
M - tumhe G se nhi krni to mt kro muje kyu rokre ho
P - kyuki S meri h
M- wait what you just said ...meri acting kam kr gyi G
G while entering - yes M thank you
P- ek min ye ho kya rha h
G - kuch nhi bs tumse confess krwana tha to M ki help li
P- mtlb m kuch smja nhi
G- are kl mne realise kia ki tum M se jealous hore ho pr man na rhe to socha kyu na iska fayda uthaya jae bdi bhen hu itna to krugi apni bhen ke lie itna perfect partner kha milega use
M- ye bro vse b mere lie to G h (wrapping his hand around her neck)
P- are nhi
M- are yrr ye kya bat hui S b nhi G b nhi m kha jau
A- khi b jao pr G ji se dur rho(pulling G away from M)
M- ab tum kon or kyu rhu m dur G se (again pulling G close )
Just M&G are listening to each other now
M - ye tumhara wala h kya
G-(mumbling kash hota) nhi h ye brahmchari h
M -kya h
G- are pgl celibate , ldkio se social diastancing pr rhne wala
M - ohh pr lg to rha kitna jyada jealous hora h tumhe mere sath dekhke
G - asa kuch nhi h M
M - vse agr celibate na hota to tum psnd krti kya ise
G - asa n
P- kya bat krre ho ap dono
G - kuch b nhi vse hi
M- hn to m ye puchra tha m G se kyu dur rhu
A- vo vo islie ye mere bhai ki gf h
M- hn or tumhare bhai ne meri gf churali uska kya
A- h mtlb
G- are A P ne confess kr lia that he likes S
A- oh asa kya are wahh dr sahb S psnd h
[1/12, 4:17 PM] P- are bro
A- hn to ab ap ho kon ho or P ne apki gf churali mtlb
M- m Madhav Rathod , G S ka friend hu or bs chotu sa natak kia P se sch bulwane ke lie
A- ye plan jrur Gji ka hoga
M- hmm ri8 (to G - dekho tumhe smjta h)
G slowly - dost h na mera ...dekha nhi uske bhai ki gf hu islie dur rhne ko khra tha uske mn me mere lie kuch nhi h M
J enters
J- are G , M tum dono...are G aj dp se bat hui jld hi tum dono ki engagement fix krne wale h hm
Pragnima - kyaa
J - are itna shock kyu hore ho
P - pr itni jldi kya h
J - jldi nhi bs tum dono ka relation official krna h
M - wow sounds fancy
P & G shares confused looks
J-A sunlo bhai apne daddy ko khna abhi se leave application leke rkhe sagai , shadi sbme ana h use vse phone hi na uthata h vo... komal bhabhi se mini bat krlegi
A- ji chachu m khduga unhe : he leaves
J leaves but G notices a sudden change in A's expression
G leaves & follow A in a empty room in hospital she eavesdrop the conversation
A on call- hn meri bhn khduga unhe agr tere bday pe nhi aege tu unse bat nhi kregi;hangs up ; kse bulau m daddy ko kya kru m (sits on a chair placed there)
G comes
G - A kya hua tum ase yha kyu baithe ho
A- nhi vo bs ase hi
G - kuch to bat h A , jb b tumhare papa ki bat hoti b ase hi ignore krte ho , abhi apni bhn se juth b bole,are bula lo na
A - bs nhi bula skta ap jao (he turns but G is clearly able to see tears in his eyes)
G - muje b na btaoge kya bat h (goes in front of him and holds his hand, he loses his control & tightly hug G & start crying)
A - vo nhi a skte kbi nhi
G - mtlb
A back off - jb h hi nhi to aege kse do sal phle hi vo is dunia se chle gye
G shocked- kya pr tum to khte the vo army me h or Srinagar me posting h to
A - hn kha tha pr juth jo pichle do sal se khta ara hu
G - kyaa mtlb ... muje btao
A - G ji mere daddy Shamsher Rajawat , Commander in BSF...m na phli bar as a Inspector papa ke pas gya tha Srinagar apna phla medal leke best officer ka...he was hell happy 'mera beta bhot kamyab bnega , aj inspector bna h kl commissioner b bnega , m border pr sewa tu broder ke andr rhke desh sewa kr'
Tbhi kuch ldkia ayi or ek threatening area me jane ki khne lgi ki unka fundamental right h khi b jana daddy or officers ne bhot smjaya vha danger pr nhi mani laws ke according kuch nhi kr ske pr vo chli gyi
G - fir kya hua
A - hona kya tha fas gyi or mere daddy kbi kisi or officer ko dangerous place pe jana avoid hi krate the to vo khud gye bs ek soldier ke sath or vha terrorist ke sath firing b hui unhone sb ko mar b dia pr ek terrorist ne firing ki or ek ldki ko bachane ki vjh se unko goli lg gyi or unhe hospital me le gye or
G - or (tears drop down on A's hand)
A - ek bete ne apne bap ko apni ankho ke samne kho dia
G - A smhalo apne apko , 2 sal se itna bda dukh apne andar rkha h ,pgll kbi kisi ko btaya nhi apni mummy ko b nhi bhn ko b nhi
A - meri pavni vo to bhot sensitive h specially papa ke lie pta h jb daddy jate the na ro roke fever ho jata tha ...ek diary maintain rkhti h mummy , bhai , teacher ne data or jb daddy vaps ate to vo diary pdte or sbki class lgti thi vo bcchi nhi sah paegi or mummy ko nhi nhi .. islie m hi kbi kbi daddy ki awaj me unse bat krta hu
G - kb tk nhi btaoge
A - jb tk chupa skta hu ..kya jata h meri mummy or behn agr ase khush h to .. bs islie m ldkio se nafrat krta hu dusro ki bat hi nhi smjti un ldkio kya pta ki ek bacchi ne apne daddy ko
G - pr m smjti hu ..mne b meri mummy ko khoya
Continuosly both are crying
A hugs her - apko rote hue na dekh skta m ap bhot special ho mere lie(wipes of tears of her ) G ji aj tk yo bat mne khudse b na boli thi pr aj apko btadi h plzz kisi ko b nhi batana plzz
G - itna trust krte ho na kbi nhi btaugi... pr A tumhe apne ghr pe ye bat bta deni chahie
A - himmat nhi hoti na plzz mne sirf ye bat apko btai h P ko b nhi sirf apko
G - hmm wada kro mujse hr bat share kroge... m hu hmesa tumhe smjne ke lie
A - islie to ap mere lie itne special ho na ...vse aj m khush hu mere bhai ko apki bhn psnd a gyi (in mind - pta nhi kyu khushi ho kyu rhi h P ko koi or psnd a gyi ya use ap na psnd ayi)
G receives a message ....

TBC

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