Idea for igcse narrative writing (only first paragraph)

narrative using idioms

After few weeks of samuel's death, I began to smell a rat; weird things being triggering me. As I hit the sack I could hear loggerheads of people, those quarrels had something I could not read between the lines. Time started to pass it become impossible to keep one head above the water with inflation, I plainly decided to tighten my belt.

On the next morning, I received a brown smirch box from nowhere, it had no name on or even address, I brought it inside, it was like water off a duck to me; because I usually received these types of parcels as Iam a blogger writer by profession.

I put the box on the table and went to take a warm shower. After fifteen minutes later my hands landed on a box. I unboxed it, it wind out my sail; there was pictures of samuel and mine, also fifty five hundred dollar cheque to grease my palm. It seems like the sender knows me very well that iam financially broke, however the grave problem was the picture was middle in haystack. The terrifying thing about it was only me and samuel knew about it