I'm sitting bored at home so I thought that I'd make this better.
"NO, STOP... please." He shouted, but no one heard him. No one will ever hear him. When will this end? He looks around. He's again in a pitch black room, or at least he thinks it's a room. He tries to move but he's frozen in place. It chuckles. He looks up. "Welcome back John", it says, but the mouth doesn't seem to move. He tries again to move, but he can't. "Why do you try to escape? You know that it's impossible, but I guess it's in human nature to be insufferable." It says, he could almost hear the smirk on its face. "This is an endless cycle, you have to accept it". He struggled again, the creature seemed to float to him. He could hear something dragging across the ground, he realised it was making that noise. It was half snake. That was his last thought as it knocked him out with its tail.
He woke up. "Welcome back John".
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