Authors Note

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I'd like some feedback on this short story, please tell me if you'd like more/I should turn it into a real story or what you think I could improve on.

I will take criticism, as long as you are not mean about it. I want to become a better writer so your input will help.

Thank you for reading my story and I hope you have a wonderful day/night/evening!!

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