Invite (draft ver.)

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This is the same chapter, but just completely unedited in anyway, may be hard to read :) Also this may be a little more comedic since Syla likes to put a lot of strange things it so prepare yourself XD

This is smut because I'm horny and bored on a camping trip ummm alive AU and they're like 16/17 and have been dating for two years

Kou POV:
I pulled up to souske's house
Cold weather surrounding me as I left the car I shuddered knocking on their door it didn't open and I could hear the conversation through the door "oh it's awfully late for your boyfriend to come over, will he be staying the night?" "Well duh mom that's what I said earlier" "well I'm okay with it but if you boys are planning to get a little freaky please be safe" I blushed at that we didn't exactly plan anything like that but maybe.....NO mitsuba would not like his mind drifting like that at all in fact he felt really dirty to even think about that anyway turning his attention back to the door he heard a small "thanks..."  a clatter of footsteps and the door opened it was souskes mom "hey sweetie he's up in his room if you need anything feel free to ask" "thank you ma'am" I said "no need to call me ma'am honey now go up he's waiting for you"
I clomped up the stairs and knocked on souske's door he opened it and said "finally here lameass come in"
I stepped into his room and the overwhelmingly sweet sent of ylangylang filled my nostrils "it smells nice in here" "what are you trying to get in my pants through through flattery?
Well it ain't gonna work"
"Oh I-uh no but speaking of flattery you look beautiful bae"
He blushed immensely at that
But I wasn't wrong he was wearing some pajamas that included a pastel pink tank top with lace hem and some extremely tight extremely short shorts of the same shade that hugged his curves in the nicest way and kou knew if he focused on that for too long he'd start to sweat profusely.
Mitsuba being mitsuba noticed his glance and yelled "YOU'RE SUCH A GOD DAMN PERVERT UNDRESSING ME WITH YOUR EYES LIKE THAT I KNOW WHAT YOUR THINKING"
"But I-I just think you look really sexy-I MEAN CUTE and I really like complementing you I mean- you are my boyfriend-" I stuttered out it was sorta true I guess except when I had to correct myself I didn't want to do that "ah you think i look sexy?" he said quietly blushing like a coral reef
"Oh definitely yeah you look really sexy!" I say with a bit to much confidence but who can help but be confident when speaking the truth "so do you feel like you want to like ummm-err" "what?" He muttered something incoherent "sorry I didn't hear you but what ever it is don't feel embarrassed to tell me" which was absolutely true "do you want to have sex with me?" he said finally

MITSUBAS POV BECAUSE IM WRITING THIS AT 3:00 WITH NO SERVICE HOW DID I MANAGE TO STAY UP THAT LATE WITHOUT THE INTERNET

it was really embarrassing to ask that but I mean I think about it a lot stuff like when and how and if it was even going to feel good
But genuinely it was more embarrassing to ask then when my mom told me to be safe and gave me a present and a hug earlier
He had unboxed the gift earlier and had found around 25 condoms a pump bottle of lube and some Gatorade and candy the box was promptly hidden in my bedside drawer in perfect time before kou knocked on the door.
Now kou was standing in front of myself blushing fiercely at what i had asked "oh" was all he said I started to get nervous what if he thought I was unfuckable or he didn't want to ever have sex with me maybe he could be asexual and I was just breaking his comfort zone
Was I the real perv here
What if he just said I was sexy to be nice and he really thought I was ugly "well Ummm I guess that would be enjoyable" he said slowly oh so he does think I'm submissive and breedable that's good to know "but I'm confused if you mean now or just ever in general"
"I guess whenever you want to" I said lowkey hoping he wanted to now "oh okay." He climbed up on my bunk sitting with his legs dangling down the ladder "so I'm okay with doing it now are you?"
"HELL YES" i lowkey screamed he jumped slightly surprised at my yelling "oh okay so wanna come up here then" I climb up the ladder stopping when my head was at his crotch resting my chin on his umm parts my eyes locked with his for a moment and he blushed deeply "so like what did you feel like doing" he fumbled with his words I climbed up into the bed "I really feel like giving you head if that's okay" I whispered into his ear "of course I was a little worried you'd want to like go all the way" I blushed I know I'd love to do that eventually but I'm not ready to have my bussy destroyed JUST yet
"Oh nonono none of that yet" I said wanting him to know I felt the same
"Oh good" we sat in an awkward silence for a minute but then "mitsuba souske you look so fucking cute right now and i really really want to kiss you may I?" I nod in consent he grabs my hands and pulls me in his lips are chapped and rough but it feels so incredibly good it's an intoxicating feeling to be honest and when he pulls away he always comes back to give me little kisses on the corner of my mouth he slides his hands up and down my arms pulling me into his lap
I can tell he's hard from sitting on him but I don't want to have him feel awkward so I don't acknowledge it but god when he lightly licks my lips or grinds up a little bit it just drives me crazy his hands are sliding down rubbing my ass now and I'm realizing just how short my pants really are now that they're riding up my ass making it available to kou he rubs it for a second before breaking the kiss to ask "is it okay for me to do that?" "of course I love it" I pant out and he goes back to what he was doing I kiss him more passionately than I ever have before my tongue rubbing against the roof of his mouth his hands now rubbing the inside of my thighs occasionally touching my 69 INCH MASSIVE CO- I mean my um sensitive parts
He grinds up on me making me moan like no tomorrow
I put my hands down to the hem of his shirt looking up at his face for consent he gave me a small nod so I pulled off his shirt and kissed his chest up and down he was panting lightly and it sounded heavenly his hands slid up over my hips and up my shirt I could tell what he wanted so I sat up and took off my shirt he stared at my body obviously checking me out "wow your body is so beautiful" he said sounding like a lovestruck little boy "that sounds pervy don't say things like that" I say kinda teasing him because really I thought it was kinda sweet
"It's not pervy it's just true" he says sounding like a total F-boy I giggle and blush like a horny schoolgirl "can I just suck your dick now" I say just wanting to have him in me (BLAKE I SEE YOU THINKING DIRTY YOU BETTER CHILL)
"Oh if you're ready then I am" he says trying to hide his desire i nod and kiss his lips twice before sliding my head down to his torso kissing the little bit of light hair leading down into his pants his hands are rubbing my hair now down from its normal ponytail I can tell he wants me to unbutton his now tight pants but I'm a tease so I just rub his hips and thighs well kissing him lightly eventually he says what I knew he was thinking "Mmmm bae this feels amazing but can you please unbutton my jeans it's getting uncomfortable" I nod and comply undoing the buttons and unzipping his fly I look up to check if he's still good and I see him looking at the ceiling in pure bliss so I mentally prepare myself and grab the belt loops of his jeans pulling them down to toss them off the bed "you good?" I ask him "perfect~" he answers in a tone I've never heard but I can tell it's his moaning voice and so I already love it I look down admiring his boxers with little ghost designs on them also you know admiring his bulge which looked like it was the perfect size to me I put my hands on his hips rubbing my face into his bulge through his underwear "aghhhhhhhh-Mmmmmm~" he moaned loudly which I liked but I don't know if the upstairs neighbors appreciate it as much as I do I'm feeling a little trapped so I sit up a second to reveal my lacey panties and go back to rubbing on his bulge this time with my hands  all the while he's making the most wonderful sounds and I love it "mmm-ah mitsy wait~" I stop doing what I'm doing  "anything wrong kou?" I ask worried "nothing wrong mitsy I just ummm need some water" I smile happy it's nothing bad remembering that mom gave me Gatorade I crawl down and grab it from my desk I get back up and give it to him "okay here you go drink up" he guzzled half the bottle and lidded it up "thanks mitsy I needed that~" "no problem" I say truthfully I kneel down in between his legs "are you ready for me to go all the way?" I say a little nervous because I've never done this before
"If you are then yes!" "Okay" I tuck my hands under the waistband of his boxers I lock eyes with him and pull down

KOUS POV BECAUSE IM WRITING SMUT IN FRONT OF MY EXTENDED FAMILY AND NOBODYS GOING TO KNOW

I was not expecting this when mitsuba invited me over earlier but here he is  looking into my eyes with a lust filled stare well simultaneously pulling my ghost boxers off my legs leaning teasingly close to my (HOT THICC CO-) intimate parts I suddenly felt a wave of insecurity what if he thought I was small? Or if he thought I shaved there or something? He looked up at me and seem to have noticed the insecurity in my eyes "are you still comfortable? you look a little bit worried" he said leaning away from me "yeah I'm definitely still comfortable I'm just worried that you won't like it or something." I say stuttering on my words "oh... Well I feel pretty confident that I'll like it but if either of us don't then there's no obligation to do ever even do it again okay?" He says in a way that makes me feel so much better "okay." He puts his hands on my hips again this time bare and looks up at my face for consent I nod slowly and he puts his head down

MITSUBAS POV BECAUSE I LIKE WRITING FROM HIS POV MORE ALSO IM HALFWAY DONE WITH MY TRIP SO YEY CANT WAIT TO BE CALLED UNHOLY BY BLAKE

I take a nice deep breath and lean down to lick him from base to tip he makes a noise I can't even describe but it's so beautiful I can't even describe I haven't really focused on his dick yet but he's a perfect length of about 5 inch's and the nicest Girth took look up and he's panting head leaning back I decide it's now or never so I wrap my mouth around the head carefully making sure to do all the tips I learned from late night safari searches like covering my teeth as much as possible so I don't scratch him
He's making really nice pleasure noises so I assume he's having fun so I go down deeper almost to his base and use my tongue to stimulate his sensitive slit "oh my...mmmmmfuck~" he moans putting his hands on my cheeks and rubbing his finger back and forth (face cheeks Blake like on your face) I decide to go as deep as possible without throwing up I go down enough to have my nose in the light blond sparse hairs at his base I taste the saltiness of pre-cum in the back of my mouth my brain feels a little bit my brain starts filtering out the moans as background noise and I start moving my head up and down sucking hard but not TOO hard he fits my mouth so nicely I simply cannot stand it suddenly I hear him say "wait" he pulls my head off slowly making a light popping noise "is anything wrong?" I say a little concerned I hurt him "no nothings wrong it's just I umm..." he says trailing off "you can tell me" i say hoping it's nothing to do with me "no never mind it's really stupid" "no I want to know whatever it is isn't stupid" "it's just I haven't told you I love you yet tonight" he says sounding a little bit upset "oh kou sweetie that is so cute and you can do it now if you like I wouldn't mind" "okay well I love you a lot mitsuba souske" he says giving me a stomach drop "I love you too kou minamoto" I say meaning every word he leans down and gives me a kiss light and airy yet filled with passion we just sit there staring into each other's eyes and then I blink out of it and ask if I can continue he gives me consent and I continue my work vision blurred from lust he starts to twitch in my mouth and I can't stand it anymore so I reach my left hand down and grind against my hand hard as I feel is physically possible my mouth still working as hard as it can on his very swollen cock I can tell that he is close my the way his moans are becoming more high pitched he suddenly grabs my hair and holds on tight I assume it would hurt some people but to me it felt comforting like he was holding me close I pull away slightly using my tongue to lap continuously at his slit ***HE PEES IN MY MOUTH AND WE BOTH CUM AND DIE*** he's clearly about to cum and grinding against my hand isn't enough so I slip my hand into my panties and start stroking myself I take him into my mouth again my moans vibrating against him "Mmmmmm-ahhhhhhhahhh I think I'm ughhh finishing" he says five seconds before cumming into my mouth I pull away and wipe my mouth before spitting it out unto the sheets  "sorry not to be rude but it doesn't exactly taste good" I say which is very true it was bitter and salty and I didn't like it one bit I guess porn exaggerated the taste "it's fine I wouldn't like tadpole baby juice ether" he says sleepily I laugh "I love you so much kou" "love you too mitsy" he said before turning his attention to something else "you're still hard mitsy do you want me to touch you?" He asked which was nice but I'd prefer to do it myself which is exactly what I told him "well you go do that I'm going to change into pajamas" after I'm done with my business in the bathroom I come back to him in sweatpants and a tank top looking like my dad who's getting milk (I guess you could call him daddy huh) I change into another pj set like the one before but in blue and sit down next to him "what do you want to do now?" I ask "want to watch some tv?"
"Okay" we find a good Netflix show and start watching "oh want some candy" I say remembering the stuff my mom gave me "that sounds nice" eventually we fall asleep cuddling covered in pillows

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