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I don't like you back by ever_after04

judge : pravallika_gajul

(Genre- Teen Fiction )

Total- (94/100)

Overall polished quality (43/45)

↠ Plot:- (15/15)

↠ Opening:- (4/5)

↠ Genre development :- (9/10)

↠ Grammar:- (10/10)

↠ Overall:- (5/5)

Mechanics (33/35)

↠ Character Development:- (14/15)

↠ Originality and Flow:- (10/10)

↠ Dialogues:- (9/10)

General enjoyment (5/5)

↠ Emotion conveyed-(5/5)

Other (13/15)

↠Cover-(4/5)

↠Title-(4/5)

↠blurb-(5/5)

Feedback: The blurb was really well written. You could try to make an intriguing cover. You have written such a beautiful story. It kept me always lost in your book. The concept was just so heart touching. It feels so realistic. I can actually imagine two people like Dani and Acton actually in this world having their story being written. You have done an awesome job.

The main points where you have lost a few marks is that your opening could have been more impressive. Maybe some quote that Dani liked or something like that.

SECOND PLACE

The Empress of Doom by scrabblepost

(Genre- Fantasy)

Total- (93.5/100)

Overall polished quality (42/45)

↠ Plot:- (14/15)

↠ Opening:- (4/5)

↠ Genre development :- (10/10)

↠ Grammar:- (10/10)