Rewriting Progress: 5/27 Chapters
Hi so, quick notes before you read. I will eventually finish rewriting this, and you are free to read it in the meantime as it will probably take super long, but until then these are the main things I will be fixing. (There is a lot)
- Pov Change: I prefer writing third person nowadays, and will most likely be looking to alter this book to that. That means that the POV will randomly change during editing and I do apologise for that.
-Grammar: Need I say more, it's horrendous. Barely any paragraph structure, words and vocab are weak etc.
-OOC Characters: Many of the characters are too friendly for what I was originally going for, and don't match the way they were intended (Namely Wilb*r and Dr*am) will be altered to reflect this.
- Controversy Adressing: I will not be painting either Wilb*r or Dr*am in a good light. Though these characters are purely representations of their Dsmp rp characters, I do not approve of the things they've done in real life. And thus I will not be painting them in positive lights.
-Going Off Og Story: I stuck way too closely to the original story told at first, which is quite boring to me now. I want to rework in characters who weren't in the Dsmp early days who would add to the story, and I won't be clinging too much to that story.
I think that's the major things. Though I know this fandom is like gone, and I should just let it rest, I've recently been binge watching old streams and thought I'd take a crack at rewriting this whole thing while I'm into the lore again. This is basically a way for me to revisit my old love of this time! And an ode to the brilliant character that Technoblade crafted in this lore. Rest in peace legend. ❤️🩹
And that's all, much love and I hope you enjoy 🫶
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Cadere (Technoblade x Reader)
FanfictionCadere; V (Verb): | To Fall. | With threats of impending war now hung in the balance, you could no longer sit idly by and watch as the very world around you, crumbled. After getting in touch with an old friend, you finally broke free of the gilded c...
