💫 Introduction 💫

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Rewriting Progress: 5/27 Chapters

Hi so, quick notes before you read. I will eventually finish rewriting this, and you are free to read it in the meantime as it will probably take super long, but until then these are the main things I will be fixing. (There is a lot)

- Pov Change: I prefer writing third person nowadays, and will most likely be looking to alter this book to that. That means that the POV will randomly change during editing and I do apologise for that.

-Grammar: Need I say more, it's horrendous. Barely any paragraph structure, words and vocab are weak etc.

-OOC Characters: Many of the characters are too friendly for what I was originally going for, and don't match the way they were intended (Namely Wilb*r and Dr*am) will be altered to reflect this.

- Controversy Adressing: I will not be painting either Wilb*r or Dr*am in a good light. Though these characters are purely representations of their Dsmp rp characters, I do not approve of the things they've done in real life. And thus I will not be painting them in positive lights.

-Going Off Og Story: I stuck way too closely to the original story told at first, which is quite boring to me now. I want to rework in characters who weren't in the Dsmp early days who would add to the story, and I won't be clinging too much to that story.

I think that's the major things. Though I know this fandom is like gone, and I should just let it rest, I've recently been binge watching old streams and thought I'd take a crack at rewriting this whole thing while I'm into the lore again. This is basically a way for me to revisit my old love of this time! And an ode to the brilliant character that Technoblade crafted in this lore. Rest in peace legend. ❤️‍🩹

And that's all, much love and I hope you enjoy 🫶

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