𝚅𝚊𝚖𝚙𝚒𝚛𝚎/𝚆𝚎𝚛𝚎𝚠𝚘𝚕𝚏 𝚆𝚒𝚗𝚗𝚎𝚛𝚜

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𝙷𝚎𝚕𝚕𝚘. 𝚈𝚎𝚜 𝚖𝚢 𝚋𝚎𝚊𝚞𝚝𝚒𝚏𝚞𝚕 𝚜𝚠𝚎𝚎𝚝𝚜. 𝙸𝚝 𝚑𝚊𝚜 𝚋𝚎𝚎𝚗 𝚊 𝚠𝚑𝚒𝚕𝚎 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝙸 𝚊𝚖 𝚋𝚊𝚌𝚔 𝚠𝚒𝚝𝚑 𝚝𝚑𝚎 𝚆𝚎𝚛𝚎𝚠𝚘𝚕𝚏/𝚅𝚊𝚖𝚙𝚒𝚛𝚎 𝚛𝚎𝚜𝚞𝚕𝚝𝚜. 𝙸 𝚊𝚖 𝚑𝚊𝚙𝚙𝚢 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚜𝚝𝚒𝚌𝚔 𝚊𝚛𝚘𝚞𝚗𝚍 𝚊𝚗𝚍 𝚠𝚊𝚒𝚝𝚎𝚍 𝚙𝚊𝚝𝚒𝚎𝚗𝚝𝚕𝚢 𝚏𝚘𝚛 𝚢𝚘𝚞𝚛 𝚛𝚎𝚜𝚞𝚕𝚝𝚜. 𝚃𝚑𝚊𝚗𝚔 𝚢𝚘𝚞 𝚏𝚘𝚛 𝚠𝚊𝚒𝚝𝚒𝚗𝚐. 𝙵𝚞𝚛𝚝𝚑𝚎𝚛 𝚍𝚘 𝚘𝚛 𝚜𝚊𝚢, 𝚕𝚎𝚝'𝚜 𝚐𝚘.

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                   1𝕤𝕥 ℙ𝕝𝕒𝕔𝕖 𝕎𝕚𝕟𝕟𝕖𝕣

Judge: Aserranoaldana


Blood Moon Rising by lizzyJ_

Cover-5/5

Title-5/5

Blurb-5/5

Description-10/10

Plot-10/10

Grammar-10/10

Originality-5/5

Enjoyment-/55

Pace-5/5

Total-60/60

Review- The cover and Title were great, It caught my attention. The blurb was great, it made me want to read. The description was wonderful, I knew where the characters were. The Plot was great, I knew what it was right away and it stayed throughout the whole story. The grammar was good, no mistakes spotted. THe originality was perfect, never seen another story like it before. I enjoyed this story and I can't wait to read more. Pace was great, Did not get confused and knew what was happening.

 Pace was great, Did not get confused and knew what was happening

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