⌦𝗕𝗘 𝗬𝗢𝗨𝗥𝗦𝗘𝗟𝗙 𝗔𝗪𝗔𝗥𝗗𝗦 [CLOSED] 2020

KTH REVIEWS!✨

3. Criminal's obsession by btsfantasyworld

(Points) 5=rules 5=reader interactions 4=Book cover *1 0=Social message 9= plot 12=Grammer and vocabulary 8= plot twist and attraction 8=emotions and character development. 8= creativity and way of writing 9=Own review.

Total:73 *74

My review: In the book cover it should be 'Obsession' instead if 'obsessions'. Just the 's' otherwise the book cover is good. Relatable to the plot and title. Grammar and English needs improvement, the author should put full stop after every paragraph to let the readers know where the Para ends. Try to add more details to the scenes. I like the pictures the author added in every chapter, it helps with imagining the characters and setting, it's a positive point. Plot twists are good and believable. Chapters are short but updates are regular which is very appreciated. I suggest writting a description though. The author interacts with readers and reply to their comments which is good. Flashbacks and present time is distinguishable. Overall, I recommend this story. Despite some English and grammatical mistakes, I'd keep reading this story, it is creative one. Keep writing! ♥️

14 hours to reach you by @exomypeterpans

5:rules 5:reader's interactions 4.5:book cover 4.5:description 4:book title *1 0:social message 1: plot 5:grammar and vocabulary 1: plot twist and attraction 0: emotions and character development 1:creativity and way of writing 1:Own review.

Total:38 *39

Uh...I'm gonna give my honest review...... I'm sorry if it seems harsh. The plot is very confusing, there is no beginning, the story starts in a very blunt way and abruptly. There are no details, and way of writing is very simple. I appreciate that the author added pictures but even the pictures quality isn't the best . I suggest improving English grammar and vocabulary. Add some more details, try to add pictures with a better quality. Punctuation needs improvement. I can't feel the emotions while reading it. That's it. The book cover is really good! Author has taken their time in reading comments cause' I noticed they replied to mostly all of them. Adding pictures is also appreciated,however I suggest the author to improve their English and writting style and try to give more details, so the plot won't be confusing! Keep writing! ♥️♥️

Judge: NamSeokie-ssi

#Save Me Army by marie0211

Total Marks ~ 100 Marks for following the rules - 5/5 Marks for reader interaction- 5/5 Marks for book cover: 3/5 The cover is unique. This is the first time I am seeing a cover like this but it would be better if you would have added some other materials to make it more eye catchy. Marks for book description: 3/5 Make the book description more creative to attract readers at first sight. Your description is good but please make it creative. Marks for book title: 5/5 The title matches well with the story. And unique from others it described the story well.

Marks for social message: 4/5 Marks for book plot: 9/10 Plots were well formed giving perfect image about the story and the characters Marks for grammar and vocabulary: 19/20 You played well with the grammar and vocabulary which is very important to make a good story. Marks for plot twist: 8/10 Marks for character development: 9/10 Author have made her characters uniquely and mentioned them well in the story. Marks for creativity and way of writing: 8/10 It was simple yet good, easy for readers to understand the story easily. Marks for my opinion on the book: 8/10 I have personally liked the book a lot. Author has worked hard and spun her story well, she has played well with her characters and provided a good piece of writing for us armies.