Status: Sorry for any inconvenience but I'm changing Anaesthetic to 1st person instead of 3rd. I think it will read easier! (11 months ago)
| Name | Nikee |
| Location | Newcastle |
| Member Since | Jan 01, 2012 |
| Votes Received | 9 |
About me. I'm a new writter, and Anaesthetic is the first book I have ever written. Litterly the firrst time I wrote the chapter and that is what I came up with. My grammer and spelling is not the best so comments corrections will be desired rather than dispised!! :P I'm generally a really bubbly person but I have a 'Darkside' as do all. Anaesthetic will become a Romance so it isn't all doom and gloom. Comments are very welcome on the story line. as I said ... new writer. I will write what you will want and maybe not what you expect. The next book I will compose will ne Humour to show my diversity.... Hopeful! please vote and comment just to get the ball rolling on perfecting my story! Thanks! more to come......
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 | Anaesthetic7 parts / 19 pages, updated Jul 09, 2012 A.N - changing story from 3rd person to 1st person. I think it will read better. Sorry for any inconvenience (^-^)
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XxForgetMyHeart...
9 months ago
Hey, I'm from newcastle too lol (: So I fanned!
Monica4242
11 months ago
Thanks for fanning! :) I really appreciate it! :D
Frakkevin
11 months ago
Thanks for fanning, grab a free copy of my published novel: Smashwords: http://tinyurl.com/MadMoral ITunes: http://tinyurl.com/MoralItunes
ItalRT4u
11 months ago
Hey! Thanks so much for fanning me. Much appreciation and I hope that you enjoy the reading. Cheers!
RainbowHaven
11 months ago
@kauigirl no problem Nikee XD
kauigirl
11 months ago
Thanks for fanning:)
RainbowHaven
11 months ago
I am changing Anaesthetic to 1st person rather than have it in 3th person. I think it will be easier to read. your oppinions will be greatly appreciated!! Thanks Nikee XD
RainbowHaven
11 months ago
@nikayaya what have you said that will bum me out! I like those kind of comments ... I need constructive criticism! I want my story to be easy to read and follow along ... also a good read... have people been mean to you on here? Nikee XD
nikayaya
11 months ago
Hi Nikee, thank you so much for fanning! That is really cool that you felt confident about posting your very first work, and I'm sure it will do fine. i would suggest though, only because I just passed one year active on here, don't be bummed by bad comments, sometimes people just don't know how to say things :D hope that helps, if not, then just chalk me up to one of those people.
WhiteRabbit17
11 months ago
Hey! Just dropping in to give you a big thank you for fanning. It always means a lot to me! :) --Rabbit
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