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micstefy
22 hours ago
@RainandSunshine hi, will you mind to check these please? I've seen your observations with others so i was hoping you can try with mine: http://www.wattpad.com/story/1512225-my-ever-first-on-hold and http://www.wattpad.com/story/1144453-one-secret
swallows_
2 days ago
thank you for adding my story 'you' to your reading list, i hope you enjoy it! :)
adomania
3 days ago
@RainandSunshine oh woah thank you so much that means a lot to me. I'll try and post a new part today :)
RainandSunshine
3 days ago
@adomania I just read it then and wow. It's amazing so far. It's definitely something I'm going to continue reading :)
adomania
3 days ago
hey! thanks for adding 'illusionists' to your reading list! - jus
RainandSunshine
3 days ago
@EbVince123 haha, thanks Eb. You do realise who I am don't you? :)
EbVince123
4 days ago
Hey, I noticed that you followed me! Thank you. I hope you enjoy the works that I put up. Oh, and thank god I found another Aussie on wattpad. From Ebony
WeRcombined
2 months ago
@RainandSunshine will do so later when I get onto my computer :) (i'm on my phone)
RainandSunshine
2 months ago
@WeRcombined oh, haha. That would be nice :)
WeRcombined
2 months ago
@RainandSunshine For helping me with feedback on my book! =D
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Love this so far :)you,
Again, like before, I don't know what to say. Just wow.
illusionists
oh my god. Words can't even describe how amazing this is. It didn't seemed rushed, yet it didn't go on for too long. The way you wrote it was perfect.
illusionists
That's okay. I'm glad to help :)
Giving Up Forever (On Hold)
Interesting start. The chapter seemed a little fast paced, but it's not a major problem. You didn't punctuate a lot of your speech. For example...
Giving Up Forever (On Hold)
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