When Nina opens her eyes, she sees nothing but darkness. She is alone, with no idea where she is. She w...
University student. Struggling writer. Addicted to chocolate and basically every type of cookie on the planet. Procrastinator. Thinks she's born in the wrong era. That's basically all you need to know about me. Seriously, I don't know what else to tell you guys. Ever since I was a young teenager, I was interested in books and the art of storytelling. English is my opinion the most beautiful language and I try to honor that by not murdering the language in my books and stories. And I guess that's why I'm here, hoping you guys think I'm good enough to get published one day. Speaking of books, my focus (for the moment) lies on The Humanity Switch and I will appreciate any kind of comment you might leave me. So there's that. No pressure though. *cough*go read it*cough* Any questions or complaints, please feel free to leave me a message or PM ~Katerina
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Thank you for the dedication. Too sweet! :) <3
@FrozenTears16 thank you for that lovely comment!
This looks like an intersting premise to a story. For a second there I thought this would be a thriller or a mystery but then I read on and it started to make sense. I think this could be a really interesting read when done right. I like teen fiction and I like a bit of humor now and then so this seems like the kind of story I would read. I'd definitely be interested to read the start to this story so I think you shouldn't delete it just yet :)
This is my favourite chapter...ever. It's hard to describe what I just read, the emotions that are so strongly expressed in the story and the strong emotions I feel (and everyone should feel. If they don't, they must not have a damn soul ;) ) when reading. It's so powerful, and so unique too. Unlike anything I've read before (not counting your previous version on Inkpop that is). It's...complex, beautiful, disturbing,... Pick your adjective. It's everything. The only critique I have is that Lucian's thoughts are a bit unclear in the beginning. You pull everything together very nicely and make it all clear about a third into the chapter, but the first few pages are sometimes hard to follow. I don't know if you should change it. I don't think so because, that's what makes Lucian, Lucian. His thoughts in that strange mind of his. And you did a great job of explaining everything later on. Can't wait to read on. By the way, did she always decide to go back? I thought that, on Inkpop, Alex tried to move on like she said she would. But I'm probably not remembering it correctly. Anyway, I wish I could vote a thousand times. One last thing. You're so incredibly talented. Please never stop writing and never, ever give up on this story. There. I have no words left now and I need a minute before I can dive back in and reread it :)