About

Ok, so I suck at writing about myself.  So I'm gonna make this short but sweet! XD

I love J.K. Rowling, Maggie Steifvater, Jessica Verday, Kami Garcia & Margaret Stohl, Marian Keynes, Gemma Malley, Jodi Picoult, Phillip Pullman, Cassandra Clare, Stephen King, Charlaine Harris, Suzanne Collins & Richelle Mead.

As you can possibly tell I'm a big Paranormal/Fantasy girl and my books are much the same.

I am currently writing more than one series but my main priority is the one I started first which is The Black Craft - you'll see more updates of this than you will of any of my other series' (such as Rebel Rebel, Going Under and The Quixwood Sisters).

I was born 2nd August 1983, I have one sister (Julie) and a dalmatian (Polly.)
That's about all there is to know about me.  The rest you'll figure out when you get to know me.

I'm farely easy going for the most part. XD
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Shallow Waters (Book 2 in the Mermaids of Damariscotta Trilogy)

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MyCraft
'that girls gotta answer my lawyer"Sure"' you could change this too 'that girls gotta answer to my lawyer.  "Sure"'

'really spend a lot of fortune' could sound better as 'really spent a fortune' or 'spent a lot of his fortune'

'well guess he is new here' just missing a letter 'well, I guess he's new here'

'thanks to his exuberance personality' -> 'thanks to his exuberant personality'

'caused my a tsunami' -> 'caused by a tsunami'

'a couple was standing' -> 'a couple were standing'

other than a few small details I thought this was a great first chapter with plenty of dialogue and descriptions of Shayna's surroundings and friend but I think there should be some more description of Shayna herself.

also try not to use the word 'as' quite so often.  switch it up every now and then with a 'while/whilst' etc

I hope this has been helpful!


MyCraft
a boy sat opposite her, looked a year - may be just add in a who before 'looked'? might round this sentence of smoothly

ebon completion - I think you meant complexion?

I instantly loved Ace, his sassy-ness is infectious I hope there will be more of his quips and one liners to come :D
I'm also dying to find out how Serena p!ssed everyone off at school
I liked the cute ending to the first chapter with 'Welcome to Bridgeway'
nicely done *applauds*
MyCraft commented on Siren Kissed - Prolouge


MyCraft
just two things I want to point out before moving on to chapter 1:

'the eyes that remind her' I think should be 'reminded her'
&
'Alec kisses hre on the' is just a small spelling error

hope you find this helpful!
the prologue is short but sweet and concise.  for only a short dialogue it emotion fuelled which is great.  I can't wait to read more :)