Wow i love the cover. wonder how u made it. Anyway interesting prologue. it really got me hooked. Reading on :) Voted.
i like this! and she makes herself sound ugly, but the descripyion you gave made her sound really pretty to me.
This is so creative, honestly I have never read something like this. The way everything flows is so great. The world you creative here is wonderful.
This is a good plot line but I feel it needs more description to add to the atmosphere the story is creating
This prologue is great! The descriptions and stuff that you use are great :) Especially the first part :D
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