wow! that was great you really my mode on for the remaining story, i guess i can't wait
OoOoh, This is intresting. Interesting? What am I saying it was amgnificent. Fabulous first chapter.. You sure got my vote
Aaah, I would react like her, but maybe I'd get a little bit more angrier 'cause I over react :D Anyways this is good :)
Wonderful way you started things!! I love how this story flows really well and the chapter is rather catchy and interesting , lovely work!!
First of all I must admit that the title caught my eyes, I love it. secondly very good start and your're writing is lovely.. all and all I enjoyed it <3
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