Great start-I actually gasped aloud when I saw the hand sticking out of the wreckage part. Wow. Nice-voted and put in my library
This is very interesting. Unfortunately, this isn't my type of read. And Ashley Benson as Sylvia! I love her on Pretty Little Liars! Great work though! (:
Wow... Just wow... This intro was amazing :) this is some of the best writing I've read in awhile :)
This is a very new idea. Something I haven't actually seen before. Your descriptions are well thought out and very good. Great work!
A really mysterious beginning that raises questions. I love questions :) And you have a good writing style and use of descriptions. Voted :D
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