Abscond: A Dystopian Society
Many years into the future, technology has advanced ~ many new items developing, a better life for people all over the world....but with more life, there is more crime. Scientists have unleashed the ultimate solution and have launched the LEECHES project ~ the Leave Everything, Eradicating Crimes in Hell; Effectively Simple Organization. The organization has created a different dimension , where those who have attempted suicide or did unforgivable crimes would repent in a dark and deadly place. Abscond, the magical~like hell has boys between the ages of ten and twenty, and they are repenting for their sins. But when a sixteen year old girl is put into this Abscond, without any memories and others are causing belief that she signals the end of Abscond. Is that favorable or unfavorable to those in the dimension? And what exactly is going on when the living conditions get worse and worse as more girls come to Abscond?
Recent Comments
Country29
I think its really good! theres a couple errors but other then that it was really good your story seems very interesting and im definetly reading on!(:
There were a few errors but other than that this is a really good idea! i like the way your writing flows. great job! xD -AdriMarie♥
@rain-kissed_midnight LOL oops!!!!!!!!!! That was a typo!!!! I meant 9/10!! Sorry about that :)
Great description and awesome first chapter! I really enjoyed reading this story and voted!
hey ur on ur way to a really cool story..voted for it cause i like it!! Lol.<3 hope u can return tha fayva :D<3
Add
Manage
Story added to My Library!
Add to your private library
My LibraryAdd this story to your public reading lists
Done
