this is really good! Something deep and not so cliched as most of the authors (including me) are.. I like it!
This is really great..sucked me right in...i like the fact that its in a guys POV..
i just got interested by the introduction, and now this poem!! your very talented in writing WOW <3
That doctor is so ignorant! How rude!!! I would demand better service. Can't wait to keep reading! Voted!
That doctor is mean, way to deny liability. The whole point of intensive care is that a nurse is there all he time to watch.
Thanks for the cookie. ^___^
I love how you describe everything, so flowing. I like the story so far too. It's very realistic.
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