I like the dea of matchmaking in this story, your descriptions were perfect, not too much and not too little, I enjoyed it.
I'm a huge Sumer for romance, and I think this story is amazing! Yes, the beginning was very interesting. I have to agree on that
I like it, but next time be more terse or to the point and try personalizing it.. other than that, The story is good keep up the good work! :)
Nice story, I like it though I don't read romance often :) Great writing, flawless Keep it up :)
I love this! I like how she has her own applications ready to hand out to people! This is such a unique story, god job. (:
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