My Best Friend, Louis Tomlinson. (Needs Editing.)

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Beth By BeffyTomlinson Completed
Meet Lily Standford, a normal, innocent girl from Doncaster. Well, life isn't so normal for you when your best friend is worldwide loved Louis Tomlinson. What happens when Lily gets stuck between unwanted guests, lies, regrets and a love triangle she is trying to get out of? When more than one person is in love with her? Who will she choose? 
    What is life really like, being Louis Tomlinson's childhood bestfriend?..
lol I have to use a translator because I speak English .... It is very difficult, do not try this at home girls. I wrote good?....
                                    don't laugh, please!!!!
i just started my first fanfic can you guys please read it its called my bully harry styles it will mean alot and can you tell me if i should carry it on thanks x
That's really good my is really not good Urs is awsome wish I was like u u did brillant Beth xx from anna
I really like it and how u put all of the info about them in the first chapter that is what u need 2 do and i like that u picked Miley 2 play her i am a fan !
I know what the problem is.  You have one direction infection(;
lol, i pictured Lily to be Eleanor, cos' Eleanor is even more perfect <3