Im Back And Better Then Ever (editing)

Dead On grammar mistakes this chapter and so on

"im call my sister hold up" I yell to my pack

"hey vans im here ill seen you tomorrow though im at a hotel" I told her softly and waited for her response

"hi and what come sleep over we got the guest house" she said

"no thanks im at a hotel and plus I brought my friends do you remember them jeff jake jessica blake and taryn and ima rent house so me and them can live there for a little dont worry ill come and visit you tomorrow" I say with a smile on my face I have no idea why ether

"oh yeah they were all adorable and if your going to live in a different house I want all of you guys to come seen me now then " she demanded of I guess ill listen

"okay be there soon" I said and hung up now time to get these assholes up and ready since they all fell asleep what other way to wake them up by pranking them I put Jakes hand in warm water to make him pee on himself and jake I deiced to paint his nails I put kick me on the back of his shirt and for jeff I wrote on his face on the forehead I put 'Tori's B*tch' and drew little flowers and stuff and then I woke the girls litely cause I got them last time in mintues Jake flew up and went pee I told him to stay quiet about the others and he noded I ended up waking them up

"okay lets go people" I yell after I was dressed since I was the last one and I got my keys . I made sure that Jeff sat all the way in the back so he wouldnt notice the marker and since there aint room for me I take the motorcycle. Cause motorcycle are awesome and I always ride one . We left and I led them to a gas station so I can get Arizona Green tea I love that tea. My died blonde hair kept going in my face when we drove to the pack house.

When I got there I saw vanessa sitting on the porch as soon as she seen the car she stood up and I put the kick stand up for my bike and and took of my helmet. 

Then stood and waited for my pack.

"Lets go Beautiful " Jake said an put his arm around my waist its his way to protect me and keep me safe and close.Everyone pulls one of us girls close and grab then by the waist tight usally its Jeff since he is always near me. we slowly walked toward my sister I havent seen in years. Well 2 years.

"oh my god Victoria your hot" she yells and runs and hugs me and gives everyone a hug

"Hey Vans nice to see you to yes ive been great" I say

"wow I missed you so much you got taller and you all got super hot sorry if I sound like a pedophile " she says witch makes us laugh and the door opens up behind Vanessa.

"Victoria sweetheart oh my I missed you so much baby girl you got so big and oh my god come hug your mother" I looked at her she still looked the same tall brown his green eyes like mine but she had lots of bags under her eye. So I go and try to hug her but got pulled back by jake holding on tighter and growled a little

"Jake im fine I promise calm down" I told him and let go off me and I went to hug my mom and went back to jake

"so are you guys mates " Vanessa ask out of no where and we all just laughed

"No there just over protective " I say

"okay well lets go inside its getting cold" she says and turns to go in I take a deep breathe and enter.the hoise with Jake not letting me go at all as soon as I entered the house I got quiet as soon as Vanessa closed the door the whole pack was in the living got quiet and turned to face us. It was very embarassing everyone staring at us.

"who is the blonde she is hot" a kid I haven't no idea who said and all the guys in my packed growled and Jakes Grip got way tighter

"Dude chill" the same kid said to all the guys in my pack

"Hey guys well you know Victoria"She says pointing to me  

"well this is her pack I believe there are more of them but thats jake jess Jeff blake and Taryn " she finished and everyone looked shocked

"are you two mates" a little girls says while pulling my jacket she looks 4

I bend down to her level so I can see her and respond  

"nope just bestfriend we all.are" he nods and stares at me

"wait whats your pack name"she asked againg well here goes the shoked faces again so I stand up and tell her

"Redblood" I whisper and everyone stop and looks at us eyeing us down

"wait what you guys arent the redblood If you are wheres your Alpha I heard he is Hot " a blonde tramp say and everyone in my pack laughs and she looks at me confussed

"well we are.the redblonde and we will show you and the alpha she is very hot right guys" Jake says and turns toward our pack and they agree and then out of no where jake lifts his shirt and turns to show them his tattoo on the back of a werewolf howling at the moon with dead werewolfs and human under him the rest of my pack does the same but me and everyone is watching.so I pull from Jake and take off my jaket and people gasp at my scars and some tattoos that are on top of them I turn and show them and they all looked very shock

"okay so you guys are so weres the rest of your pack I heard theres 50 of you thats why you guys always win" Louis said he use to be nice to me at school

"well this is our pack us 6 always been 6 of us"I say

"then who is Alpha "louis asked again so I got up and went to shake his hand

"Hey Alpha Victoria" I say shacking his hand and heard everyone gasp damn thats getting annoying

"Well Vans up think ima leave im tired and they are beat " I said pointing to them.and looking at Jeff still has Marker all over his face so I laughed really hard

"No you cant Alpha Eric wants to see you and talk to you" she yells

"why"I say seriously

"I have no idea he just make sure you wont attack one of us " she says calmly and then the door opens and in walks this very tall guy. With blonde hair baby blue eyes perfect jaw line perfect everything. He stops when he comes in and stares at me for about 5 mintues. Before I look at Jake to see what he is doing witch he is looking at me.

"Hello im Alpha Eric "He says with the cutest voice and puts his hand out for me to shake

"Hi im Victoria this is my pack Jakob or Jake, Jess, Jeff, Blake, and Taryn" I said and gently reached for his hand. When we touched I felt a shock and butterflies I pulled back fast and leaned on Jake I heard Eric growl a little witch made me laugh and smile big.

"So your Tori's Bitch" Eric says looking at Jeff witch makes me laugh cause i forgot I put that on his forhead.

"Excuse me" Jeff shouts and Eric points to his forhead. Jeff looks in the mirror that wwas to the left of him. His head turned to me so fast i thought he would have got whipblash.

"your dead this means war" he says witch makes me laugh more when I came to a stop I seen Eric looking at me.

"Victoria can I speak to you" he says politely.