Part One

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"alright girls, you ready?" Loren asks her girls starting the car

"the sooner we get there the better right?" she continues, not getting a response from either of her daughters, "you guys will love it there, its warm and sunny barely any rain and the house! oh its really big and your getting your own rooms, isn't that exciting?" she goes on

"oh and th..."

"OK mom we get it, grazenville is a little over paradise! but please can we get there in silence? maybe give us some time to transit first?" gale cuts her mother short, ever since Loren got a transfer she's been talking of nothing but grazenville, she was a happy wife and a loving mother to her two daughters once...the perfect suburban family but as after she and her husband separated, she decided to take back her old job as a nurse and get herself together..and it worked, she and her girls got an apartment and started theyre life, one could even say it was perfect but she couldn't just sit back and watch him with that secretary homewrecker of his anylonger so she decided to pack up her remaining family and move to grazenville, her hometown and start fresh.. the only problem was, her daughters weren't exactly head over heals about the idea, sure it was hard for them too, people knowing about it, the sort of kindness towards them, and a bigger house would be the icing on the cake but they had built a life in Chicago and moving from the city to a weird half countryside half city was not the solution but they agreed to go with her knowing her pride was on the line.

"look mom i know your excited and all and I'm sorry but you have to understand that its gonna take sometime to get used to it and you're not exactly helping by saying what paradise grayville is" gale tells her mother

"grazenville" Maya corrects.

Maya; Loren's youngest was 14 and had a lot of misunderstanding about the whole thing so she mostly kept to herself and let her sister take the lead.

"great! no party for me thanks"gale mumbles to herself as she remembers her plans for a party...not a party exactly but an intimate get together that may require loud music and people.... she puts her headphones on and cranks the music up, ignoring her mom for the rest of their trip...

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